Legend of The Superwoman: Part 3

Part 3: The Hand of a God

Weeks bled into a grim, exhausting month. The war, once a distant threat, was now a painful, grinding reality. General Kaelen’s disciplined Lemurian army was in retreat, baffled and overwhelmed by the savage, unpredictable ferocity of Xarthos’s Hoard. The cost of the war came home to Eldoria as a somber, ever-growing list of the fallen. The city, once a paradise, now echoed with the quiet grief of a people who had forgotten the price of conflict.

Sheral worked tirelessly alongside her parents, her hands calloused from weaving medical supplies. The war had only deepened the chasm between the city’s classes, and the casual cruelty of her peers felt like a symptom of a deeper sickness in their perfect city—a lack of empathy that Sheral could not comprehend.

The desperation in the Grand Council chamber finally reached its breaking point. General Kaelen, his crystalline armor scorched and dented, stood before the Elders, his arrogance replaced by a grim, frustrated fury.

“We cannot win a war of attrition!” he boomed. “We need a weapon that can break their will. We need to strike with the hand of a god!”

After a tense, desperate debate, the Council made a fateful decision. They summoned the ‘Wizards’—the highest order of Lemurian scientists—and gave them a single, solemn task: forge a weapon to save their world.

Deep in a secret laboratory leagues beneath the Crystal Palace, the Wizards began their work. The air in the sanctum crackled with raw power, a place where science and magic were one and the same.

“Stabilize the quantum foam!” a wizened scientist named Elara, the leader of their order, commanded, her voice calm amidst the storm of creation. “The energy matrix is like holding a newborn star in a bottle. One fluctuation and it will annihilate this entire sector.”

Her acolytes, their hands weaving intricate patterns over glowing consoles, guided shimmering threads of pure light into a crystalline mold. They were not merely building; they were convincing reality to bend to their will, inscribing foundational laws of physics into the weapon’s very core as if they were ancient enchantments.

“We have done as the Council commanded,” another Wizard, a grim-faced man named Lycen, said, his eyes filled with a deep unease. “We have created a weapon to grant a mortal the power of a god.” He turned to Elara. “But what if we give it to a man who already sees himself as one? Power doesn’t corrupt, Elara; it reveals. What will this weapon reveal about General Kaelen?”

Elara looked at the two artifacts beginning to take shape in the containment field—a belt and a choker, each housing a gem of pure, brilliant, untainted white. “It will reveal a tyrant,” she said softly. “A monster far more dangerous than Xarthos, because he will be one of our own, draped in the flag of heroism.”

The work was completed. The Artifacts of Power hovered in their containment field, humming with a power that could reshape the world, the white gems pulsing with the light of creation.

The laboratory doors hissed open. General Kaelen strode in, flanked by Elder Valerius, his entire being radiating an aura of triumphant expectation. He was a conquering hero, come to claim his prize. His eyes fell upon the artifacts, and a look of hungry awe came over his face.

“Master Elara,” the General said, his voice booming with authority. “Magnificent. I have come to claim the weapon. Lemuria has need of its new champion.”

Elara and the other Wizards moved to stand between the General and the artifacts, a quiet, unmovable barrier of simple gray robes.

“The weapon is complete, General,” Elara said, her voice quiet but unyielding. “But it will not be yours today.”

Kaelen’s triumphant expression vanished, replaced by one of cold disbelief. He took a single, heavy step forward, his armored boot clanging on the stone floor. “What did you say, old woman?” he asked, his voice a low, dangerous growl.

“Now, Kaelen, Master Elara, let us be reasonable…” Elder Valerius began, sensing the sudden, dangerous shift in the room.

Kaelen ignored him, his hand falling to the hilt of the ceremonial plasma-blade at his side. “My men are dying on the frontier while you hide in your tunnels and play with metaphysics!” he roared, his composure shattering into a thousand pieces of pure fury. “They are being slaughtered by savages armed with our own technology! That weapon,” he snarled, pointing a gauntleted finger at the artifacts, “is their salvation! It is my right, earned in the blood and sacrifice of every soldier who has fallen under my command!”

“The right to wield the power of a god is not earned in blood, General,” Elara countered, her small frame unbending before his towering rage. “It is earned in character. In humility. In kindness. Qualities you have yet to display. You speak of your soldiers’ sacrifice. Would you have them die for a tyrant? Because that is what this power would reveal you to be.”

“This is treason!” he bellowed, his hand tightening on his weapon.

“No, General. This is foresight,” another Wizard said, stepping forward. “And we will not be party to the birth of a monster.”

Elara raised her chin, her eyes meeting Kaelen’s furious glare without fear. “The weapon will not be released to you. It will not be released to any man by a decree of a frightened Council. We, its creators, demand a public Choosing Ceremony. Let every citizen of Eldoria gather in the Grand Plaza, and let the artifacts themselves seek out the one with the worthiness and the purity of heart to wield them without corruption. That is our only condition.”

Kaelen stood seething, his body trembling with barely contained violence. He wanted to strike them down, to take what was his by right of strength. But he saw the look in their eyes, the quiet power they held, and knew that with a single word, they could unmake their creation, rendering it all for naught. He was a warrior, but he was outmaneuvered, defeated in a battle of wills.

He took a step back, his face a mask of pure hatred. “You will regret this, Wizard,” he spat, his voice dripping with venom. “When The Hoard is breaking down the gates of this city, the blood of every citizen who dies will be on your hands.”

He turned and stormed from the laboratory, Valerius scrambling to follow in his wake.

The Wizards were left alone with their terrible, beautiful creation. They had won the confrontation, but they had set in motion a chain of events that would change Lemuria forever, forcing a public spectacle to choose a champion for a war that grew more desperate by the hour.

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Legend of The Superwoman: Part 2

Part 2: The Warlord’s Shadow

Months after the traitorous departure of Prince Xarthos, the illusion of peace was shattered. A frantic distress call from the remote outpost of Oakhaven was cut short, and the scout ships that followed returned with horrifying images. The Hoard, armed and trained by Xarthos, had conquered the settlement with savage efficiency.

The Grand Council, their philosophical debates now a bitter memory, unanimously declared war. The full might of the Lemurian military was activated under the command of the aggressive and powerful General Kaelen.

The change in Eldoria was immediate. The sky filled with military patrol ships, and a permanent, shimmering energy shield was raised over the city. The serene rhythms of life were replaced by the urgent hum of a civilization preparing for the fight of its life. Conscription began, and young men from common families were marched off in stark gray uniforms.

The more wealthy young people, however, the sons of councilors and engineers, were largely exempt. While Sheral worked tirelessly at her family’s shop, weaving durable military uniforms and medical bandages, she would see boys like Lyren, who had once tried to court her, still lounging at sky-cafes, their lives of leisure untouched. The girls, not being conscripted, were also still around, and the stress of the looming war seemed to make the mean ones meaner. Sheral didn’t begrudge the work, but she saw the injustice, a crack in the perfection of her city.

One evening, as the sun began to set, casting long shadows from the crystal towers, Sheral was walking home. She had finished a long shift at the shop and was carefully cradling a small, lightweight box in her hands. As she passed through a quieter plaza, a group of girls blocked her path. It was Cora, the daughter of a wealthy merchant, and her two friends, their shimmering robes a stark contrast to Sheral’s simple, practical tunic.

“Well, well, if it isn’t the little weirdo of Clan Crimea,” Cora sneered, her eyes falling on the box. “What’s in there? More of your ugly tapestries?”

Before Sheral could reply, Cora snatched the box from her hands.

“Give that back!” Sheral cried out, her normal, stoic composure vanishing, replaced by a raw panic that the girls immediately noticed and savored.

“Ooh, she’s protective of this one,” one of the girls giggled. Cora shook the box roughly, and a faint, desperate chirping sound came from within.

“Please, stop! You’ll hurt it!” Sheral begged, her voice thick with emotion.

Seeing this new, fascinating vulnerability, the girls began to toss the light box back and forth to each other, laughing as Sheral scrambled between them, trying desperately to get it back. “Please, I’m begging you, just give it to me,” she pleaded, her eyes welling up with tears. They had never seen her like this. They felt a thrill of power, of finally breaking the pretty, quiet girl they all secretly envied.

“Here you go, weirdo,” Cora said finally, a malicious smile on her face. She held the box out to Sheral. As Sheral reached for it with a look of profound relief, Cora let it drop to the stone ground at the last second.

Then, with a deliberate, cruel motion, she stepped on the small box, crushing it under the heel of her elegant sandal. The crunch of the delicate structure was sickeningly loud.

Sheral let out a pained scream and dropped to her knees. Panicked, crying, she fumbled with the broken lid, opening it. Inside, nestled in a bed of soft moss, was a tiny sky-finch with a broken wing she had found and was nursing back to health. Its fragile body was now crushed and lifeless.

“Oh, gross,” Cora said with a look of disgust. “She was carrying a dirty, broken animal. You’re a freak, Sheral. A total freak.”

A hot, furious anger burned through Sheral’s grief. She stood up, her face streaked with tears, but her eyes blazing with a fire they had never seen. “You killed it,” she said, her voice shaking with rage. “It was innocent. It was helpless. And you killed it for fun.”

Her anger seemed to amuse them. “What are you going to do about it?” Cora taunted.

As Sheral stepped forward, one of the girls grabbed her from behind, pinning her arms. The other two, Cora and her friend, began to punch her in the stomach. The blows were not strong, but they were vicious, knocking the wind out of her and doubling her over. She crumpled to the ground, defeated and in pain. The girls laughed one last time and sauntered away, their victory complete.

Sheral lay on the cold stone for a long time before slowly picking herself up. With gentle, trembling hands, she took the small, lifeless bird from its ruined box and cradled it, taking it home for a proper burial in her family’s small garden.

Later that evening, every comm-screen in Eldoria flickered to life with the Warlord’s ultimatum. Sheral watched with her parents, her body aching, her heart a cold, heavy stone in her chest. She saw the face of Xarthos, a man whose grand, philosophical cruelty had armed an army. But in her mind, she also saw the face of Cora, a girl whose petty, casual cruelty had crushed a helpless life for no reason at all.

She now understood, with a clarity that was both new and terrifying that evil wasn’t just a distant army. It lived in the heart of their perfect city, too. The war for Lemuria had finally begun, and Sheral Crimea, for the first time, felt the profound, burning need for a justice that could protect the truly innocent.

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Legend of The Superwoman: Part 1

Part 1: A Pure Kindness

In the quiet dawn of the world, when humanity was but a scattered collection of nascent tribes, there existed a paradise forged by wisdom and science. On a vast, verdant continent, under the familiar light of a single, golden sun, stood the magnificent civilization of Lemuria. Their capital, Eldoria, was a city of living crystal and cultivated nature. Soaring towers, grown from immense, luminous crystals, intertwined with lush, vertical gardens, reaching for the heavens. Silent, elegant sky-gondolas navigated the air between them, their energy cores humming a soft, peaceful tune.

The Lemurian people lived in a state of prolonged harmony, guided by the Grand Council of Elders and a core philosophy of sacred isolationism. They saw themselves not as rulers of the world, but as its quiet guardians. The “younger races,” the vicious and uncivilized barbarian hordes that populated the distant lands, were viewed as humanity in its infancy—violent, unpredictable, and not yet ready for the immense power Lemurian technology could offer.

This belief, the very bedrock of their peaceful existence, was not shared by all.

Prince Xarthos, a charismatic and brilliant member of the Royal Family, stood before the Grand Council in their chamber at the heart of the Crystal Palace, his voice filled with a passionate, idealistic fire.

“For millennia, we have hidden in our perfect city while the rest of the world suffers in ignorance and brutality!” he argued. “Our technology could end their famines, cure their plagues, and silence the drums of their petty wars. To hoard this knowledge is not wisdom, Elders; it is the height of selfishness!”

Elder Theron, his ancient face a roadmap of serene wisdom, rose slowly. “Your heart is noble, Prince Xarthos,” he said, his voice calm and steady. “But your idealism blinds you. To give a child a razor is not a kindness. They would turn our gifts of healing into weapons of war. Our restraint, Prince, is the only thing that preserves the fragile balance of this world.”

“Balance?” Xarthos scoffed, his voice dripping with disillusionment. “You call this stagnation ‘balance’? I call it cowardice.”

He was overruled. That night, Prince Xarthos, the favorite son of Lemuria, secretly fled Eldoria. With him, he took data crystals containing the schematics for their fundamental technologies, heading east, to the savage, war-torn lands of The Hoard.

Far from the silent, crystalline halls of power, in a bustling market district of Eldoria, the looms of the Crimea Clan Weavers hummed with a gentle, rhythmic energy. Their shop was not large, nor were they wealthy, but their work was honest and their reputation for quality was unmatched.

Inside, a young woman of seventeen summers worked a complex pattern into a tapestry. This was Sheral Crimea. To see her was to see an effortless, almost accidental beauty. A cascade of dark brunette hair, so rich it seemed to drink the light, was tied back in a simple, practical braid to keep it from the loom. Her luminous hazel eyes were usually downcast, focused on her work, but when she looked up, they held a startling depth and a disarming kindness. Her features were perfectly sculpted, her lips full and kind, her form slender and graceful. She was, by any measure, one of the most gorgeous young women in all of Eldoria.

And she did everything she could to hide it. She dressed in simple, functional tunics, never the shimmering robes favored by others. She moved with a quiet humility, a focused posture that didn’t invite attention. But it found her anyway.

A group of popular young men, sons of wealthy engineers and councilors, sauntered past the shop. Their leader, a handsome but arrogant boy named Lyren, stopped and leaned against the doorframe.

“Sheral,” he said, his voice smooth. “The Festival of Shifting Light is tonight. They say the crystalline sculptures will be magnificent. Come with me.”

Sheral didn’t look up from her loom. “That is kind of you, Lyren, but I am needed here. My family depends on me.”

“Always the diligent little weaver,” he said with a smirk, pushing off the frame. As he walked away with his friends, his voice carried back on the market air, just loud enough for her to hear. “It’s a shame. I’d still love to be the first to nail the ‘beautiful little weirdo’ of Clan Crimea.”

Sheral’s hands paused for a barest fraction of a second, the cruel words a familiar sting. A moment later, a group of girls her own age walked by, their shimmering robes a stark contrast to her simple tunic. They shot her looks of pure, unadulterated jealousy, whispering behind their hands.

“She thinks she’s too good for anyone,” one of them hissed.

Sheral let out a quiet sigh, the casual cruelty of her peers a constant, wearying presence in her life. With few friends her own age, she often took solace elsewhere. From a small satchel by her loom, she pulled out a well-worn book, its physical pages a rarity in their world of data-slates, and lost herself in the ancient stories of a time before Lemuria’s perfection.

But the social ostracism had not hardened her heart. When a small, winged lizard darted into the shop, she still smiled and placed a small bowl of water for it in a sunbeam. When a child from a neighboring stall looked longingly at a vibrant red scarf that had a minor flaw in the weave, Sheral, with a warm smile and a nod from her mother, still gave it to her as a gift. Her kindness was not a performance; it was the very core of her being, unwavering and pure.

A neighbor stopped by the shop, his face etched with concern. “Have you heard the news?” he whispered. “Prince Xarthos has departed on an ‘extended diplomatic mission’ to the outer lands.”

Sheral’s father nodded grimly. “A strange time for diplomacy,” he said.

Sheral overheard them, a faint, unexplainable chill running down her spine. She looked out from the warmth of her family’s shop at the soaring crystal towers of her home. For the first time in her life, the shimmering paradise of Eldoria felt fragile, and a shadow, born of good intentions, was beginning to stretch across their ancient land.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Finale

The defeat of the Architect was a hollow, silent victory. The moment the lead box closed, the purple energy around Superman’s temples vanished like smoke. His eyes, milky and vacant moments before, refocused with crystalline clarity. He looked at his hands, then at our battered forms, then at the destruction around him. And he remembered.

We stood with him days later in the cavernous, silent Hall of Justice, the memorial holograms of our fallen friends flickering where they once stood. Kal’s guilt was a physical presence, a shroud of darkness that seemed to dim the light around him.

“I can’t,” he whispered, his voice thick with a self-loathing that was painful to hear. He wouldn’t look at us.

“Kal, it wasn’t you,” I pleaded, my voice breaking. I stepped towards him, but he flinched away as if my touch would burn him. “It was the Architect! He controlled you, he forced you…”

“With my hands, Kara!” he finally roared, his eyes blazing with anguish, not anger. “With my strength! I felt their bones break. I saw the light leave their eyes. Bruce… Barry… they were my brothers. I laid them out like trophies!”

“We have all been made to do things against our will, Kal-El,” Diana said, her voice steady but laced with a profound sadness. “Evil does not taint the weapon, but the hand that wields it. The world needs you. Now more than ever.”

“The world?” he scoffed, a bitter, broken sound. “This world? The one that watched you suffer? The one that cheered for your torture?” He finally looked at us, his face a mask of utter despair. “I can’t be their hero. I can’t be anyone’s hero. Not after this. Every time they look at me, they’ll see a monster. And they’ll be right.”

He turned and began to float into the air.

“Don’t do this,” I begged, tears streaming down my face. “Don’t leave us alone.”

“I have to,” he said, his voice a ghost on the wind. “The universe is vast. Maybe somewhere out there, I can find a place where these hands can do something other than destroy.”

And with that, he was gone, a blue and red streak ascending into the heavens until he was just another star, leaving the two of us, the last of Earth’s great heroines, alone in a hall of ghosts.

The world we were left with was a colder, crueler place. The Architect, sitting in a maximum-security prison, became a legend. To the disenfranchised, the resentful, and the hateful, he was a folk hero. He was the man who had exposed the gods as fragile, breakable things. He was lauded on dark corners of the internet for the way he put those “uppity women” in their place. His trial was a circus, his unrepentant monologues broadcast globally, poisoning the well of public trust forever.

And the poll… we could never forget the poll. Ninety-two percent. Ninety-two percent of the world had voted to see us dismantled. How could we protect a world that saw our suffering as entertainment? How could we justify bleeding for people who had cheered for it?

The Architect had also given our enemies a gift. The live streams had been a tutorial. The precise frequency of Red Sun radiation needed to weaken a Kryptonian, the specific alloys that could dampen divine energy—our weaknesses were now public knowledge, a blueprint for our defeat downloaded onto every criminal server on the planet. We had targets on our backs, not just from supervillains, but from any common thug who dreamed of being a legend-killer.

So we made a choice. We disappeared.

The red cape and the star-spangled armor were put away. Wonder Woman returned to her life as Diana Prince, a quiet curator of antiquities. I, Kara Danvers, went back to being a journalist. We melted back into the world that had betrayed us. We still helped, but not as before. Our powers were used sparingly, anonymously. A blur of motion preventing a car crash. A mugger in an alley suddenly finding himself webbed to a wall by a miraculously strong fire escape. No costumes. No interviews. No symbols.

In a way, the Architect had won. He sat in a prison cell, but his philosophy now ruled the world. He had ended the age of heroes not by killing us, but by making it impossible for us to exist.

And the threat never faded. It grew. Across the globe, criminals big and small began to build their traps. They studied the Architect’s methods, refining them, perfecting them. Each one, from the major crime lords to the petty street thugs, harbored the same dark fantasy, the same ultimate prize that had become the new symbol of victory over a hero: to be the one to finally capture us, to hold us helpless, and to slowly, deliberately, remove our boots.

Our peace is a fragile illusion. We walk through our new lives, always looking over our shoulders, knowing that the world is watching, waiting, and hoping to see us fall. It’s just a matter of time before we’re captured and helpless again.

The end.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 8

The arena was a sterile white void, and Wonder Woman was its avenging angel. She moved with a liquid, brutal grace that spoke of centuries of combat. I was a child flailing in a hurricane. Every instinct screamed at me to fly, to use my strength, but there was nothing there. My body was a leaden prison.

She didn’t attack with malice; there was no emotion in her eyes at all. It was a cold, programmed efficiency. A sweeping leg kick sent me sprawling. A hard chop to my collarbone made my vision flash with stars. I scrambled backwards on my bare feet, the smooth floor offering no purchase, my breath coming in ragged, panicked sobs. This wasn’t a fight. It was a termination. The Architect watched from his hidden sanctum, I was sure of it, savoring the final act of my complete and utter humiliation.

Diana closed in, her hand raised for a final, decisive blow. I squeezed my eyes shut, ready for the end.

And then, the lights flickered.

A deep, groaning sound echoed through the complex, the hum of stressed machinery. The angry red sun lamps that had been my poison for so long sputtered, their light dying in an instant. For a single, breathless second, there was only darkness and silence.

Then, with the sound of a thousand dams breaking at once, the other generator kicked in. A brilliant, glorious beam of pure yellow sunlight flooded the chamber.

It hit my skin, and my body erupted. It was not a gentle warmth, but a tidal wave of pure starlight, a supernova detonating in my very marrow. Every Kryptonian cell, starved and dormant for so long, screamed into life. I felt strength, raw and infinite, pour into me, a dormant volcano roaring back to existence. My posture straightened, my muscles coiled with cosmic power, and I could feel the faint, wonderful crackle of energy behind my eyes. My body, which had felt so weak and fragile, now felt like a vessel carved from the heart of a star, every line and curve a testament to its amazing, invulnerable design.

Diana’s punch, the one that would have shattered my jaw moments before, landed with a dull thud against my cheek. It felt like a raindrop.

She drew back, a flicker of confusion crossing her vacant features. She struck again, a flurry of blows that would have felled a legion of men. They glanced off my invulnerable skin without effect.

My turn.

I moved with a speed that was a blur even to my own eyes. I caught her wrist, my grip unyielding. I stepped behind her, my other arm wrapping around her neck in a gentle but firm sleeper hold. “I’m so sorry, Diana,” I whispered. “Shhh. It’s over.”

She struggled for a moment, a warrior to the last, but she was still weakened, still just a woman. I applied steady pressure, and I felt the tension leave her body. Her gorgeous, powerful form went limp in my arms, her head resting on my shoulder as she slipped into unconsciousness. I gently laid her down on the floor.

My eyes glowed with renewed power. I focused my vision, peering through the walls and ceilings, my X-ray sight returning with crystalline clarity. And I saw him. One floor above, in a luxurious office filled with monitors displaying my torment, was the Architect. He was no longer calm. He was panicking, frantically trying to get the Red Sun generators back online.

A grim smile touched my lips. The feeling of power was a heady, righteous inferno. I looked down at the floor, then up at the ceiling of his office. I bent my knees. For the first time in what felt like a lifetime, I pushed off the ground and shattered the chains of gravity.

The flight was an explosion of pure joy. I shot upwards like a missile, crashing through the ceiling and into his office in a shower of concrete and steel. He screamed, falling back from his console. My eyes scanned the room and saw them, displayed in glass cases like trophies: Diana’s real armor, her shield, her bracelets, and the glowing Lasso of Truth.

I shattered the cases with a flick of my finger, gathered the divine artifacts, and dropped them through the hole I’d made. They landed softly beside their unconscious owner below.

“I told you, didn’t I?” I said, my voice low and vibrating with power as I advanced on the terrified little man. “I told you that you wouldn’t get away with it. That you’d pay.” I floated a few inches off the ground, a goddess of vengeance. “I’m Supergirl. And I don’t lose.” The satisfaction was a glorious fire in my chest. Victory was here.

And then he pulled it from a hidden desk compartment.

A jagged, softball-sized chunk of glowing green rock.

The effect was instantaneous and absolute. The glorious power vanished, replaced by a cellular cancer. It felt like every atom in my body was being set on fire and torn apart simultaneously. A wave of nausea and crippling weakness washed over me, and I collapsed from the air, hitting the floor hard. My amazing body, moments ago a paradigm of power, folded in on itself. My skin grew pale and clammy, my muscles spasmed uncontrollably. I writhed on the ground, helpless, the very air feeling like poison.

The Architect began to laugh, a hysterical, relieved sound. He strode over, picked me up by my throat with one hand, his grip crushing, and shoved the Kryptonite into my face.

“You never stood a chance!” he shrieked, his face contorted with insane glee.

The radiation poured into me. I screamed, a raw, agonized sound. I could feel my blood boiling, my tissues breaking down. I could see the reflection in his eyes: the veins in my neck and face were turning a sickly, glowing green, pulsing with the poison that was killing me.

“I’m going to watch the light leave your eyes,” he hissed, holding the rock closer. “I’m going to watch you die, and there is nothing, nothing, you can do to stop me!”

“He’s wrong.”

The voice was not mine. It was calm, regal, and filled with the righteous fury of a goddess. The Architect spun around.

Standing in the hole I had created was Wonder Woman. She was no longer a puppet. She was fully armored, her bracelets gleaming, her shield on her arm, the Lasso of Truth glowing at her hip. The divine energy pouring off her was a palpable force. Her eyes, clear and sharp, burned with the fire of ten thousand lifetimes.

Before the Architect could react, Diana’s hand shot out, faster than a striking cobra, and snatched the Kryptonite from his grasp. She tossed it into a lead-lined box on his desk and slammed the lid shut.

The agonizing poison receded from my body instantly. Strength, blessed and golden, began to flood back into me.

The Architect stared, his mouth agape in terror. He looked at the avenging Amazon, then at the Kryptonian goddess rising to her feet behind him.

He was just a man. We were Supergirl and Wonder Woman.

The rest was over quickly.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 7

I lay in the darkness, a broken marionette with its strings cut. The physical pain was a distant ocean, vast and overwhelming, but the true agony was the silence where my cousin’s flight had been. He was gone. Gone to kill our friends. The Architect had won.

The yellow light returned, as it always did. My four shattered limbs began their violent, accelerated mending. Bones ground together, muscle fibers re-laced, and skin sealed. It was the most excruciating pain imaginable, and I had come to know it as a form of punctuation in my endless sentence of suffering. When it was over, I was physically whole again, a pristine doll ready for a new game.

The Architect appeared on the monitor, his face alight with glee. “A new day has dawned, Kara. A world without its self-appointed guardians.”

The screen changed. It was a news broadcast, the footage chaotic and raw. A reporter was weeping near the steps of the Hall of Justice. Then the camera panned, and my heart stopped. It was them. Barry, his vibrant red suit torn and stained. Hal, his ring finger limp and lifeless. And Bruce… even in death, he looked defiant. Their bodies were laid out in a neat row, a grotesque offering from a god to a world he now owned. The chyron read: “SUPERMAN DECLARES SOLE PROTECTORATE; JUSTICE LEAGUE DISSOLVED.” He hadn’t just killed them. He had made a statement.

Grief, so pure and potent it was a physical force, tore through my hollowed-out shell. These were my friends. My mentors. My family. And Kal… my cousin, my brother, had murdered them and left them in the street like trophies. A wail of pure anguish ripped from my throat, an animal sound of loss and horror. This was my fault. I wasn’t strong enough. I hadn’t stopped him.

“A tragedy,” the Architect’s voice said, dripping with false sympathy. “But every tragedy presents an opportunity. I feel… magnanimous today. I am going to offer you and your Amazon friend a way out.”

He appeared in person, stepping into my cell. He looked at me, then gestured towards Diana’s cell. “It’s simple. The two of you will fight. To the death. The winner,” he paused, savoring the moment, “will be set free. Free to leave this place. Free to try and stop Superman. One of you will have the chance to be a hero again.”

I stared at him, my grief momentarily eclipsed by disbelief. He was offering a sliver of hope, a prize so great it was unthinkable. But the cost…

“No,” I said, my voice barely a whisper.

“No?” he raised an eyebrow.

“I won’t fight her,” I said, a flicker of my old self returning. “I won’t kill my friend for your amusement.” I looked at my own hands. “And even if I would… I can’t. Without my powers, I’m not a fighter. She is. She’s Wonder Woman, the greatest warrior who ever lived. I would lose.”

The Architect’s face darkened. My refusal, my logic, had displeased him. He closed the distance between us in two quick strides and grabbed me, his fingers digging into my arms like steel bands.

“You think you have a choice?” he snarled, his face inches from mine. Before I could react, he crushed his mouth against mine. It wasn’t like the first kiss, the cold act of ownership. This was aggressive, punishing. It was a kiss of pure, brutal dominance, meant to shatter my defiance. I struggled, beating my fists uselessly against his chest, but he was too strong. He forced my head back, his kiss bruising and violating, a final, visceral reminder that my will meant nothing. My horror was absolute, a suffocating wave of revulsion and powerlessness.

He finally threw me back against the wall, leaving me gasping and sobbing, the taste of him like poison in my mouth.

“Your consent is not a factor,” he spat.

Robotic arms descended from the ceiling, grabbing me. They dragged me from my cell, my bare feet scraping against the floor, and pulled me into the larger central chamber. It was empty, a sterile white arena. They deposited me on one side, then retracted.

Across the chamber, another gate rumbled open. Diana stepped out. She was dressed in her own replica armor, her face a blank slate, her eyes holding that terrifying emptiness. But her body was coiled with a warrior’s tension. She held no weapons, but she was a weapon.

I looked at my friend, the hero I had idolized, now my designated executioner. I looked at my own body, whole but weak, and knew I was no match for her. He was forcing me to fight a battle I had already refused, for a prize I could never win. This wasn’t a chance at freedom. It was just a more elaborate, more heartbreaking form of execution. And as Wonder Woman began to walk slowly towards me, her movements fluid and deadly, I knew my dismantling was about to enter its final, bloody act.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 6

The passage of time had become a thick, gray sludge. The cycle of pain, healing, and humiliation was the only clock I knew. I had lost count of the paying customers, the fists, the blades, the brutal energies that had torn my body apart. I had been broken and remade so many times that I felt like a ghost, haunting a body that was no longer my own.

In the deepest, most silent corners of my mind, where the Architect’s torments couldn’t quite reach, a single, tiny ember of hope remained. Its name was Kal-El. My cousin. Superman. They could fool the world, they could capture Amazons and Kryptonians, but they couldn’t hide from him forever. He would come. I would close my eyes and picture it: the walls of this white hell shattering inward, his righteous fury a cleansing fire, the familiar blue of his suit the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. He would find us. He had to.

One day, the Architect entered my cell, not with a customer or a replica costume, but with an air of finality. He wore a triumphant, indulgent smile.

“My dear Kara,” he began, “I have sensed the last flicker of defiance in you. A childish, persistent fantasy that your cousin will swoop in to save the day. I thought it was time we addressed that.”

A massive section of the wall across from my cell became transparent, revealing a much larger chamber. And in the center of it, he stood. Kal. He was in his iconic suit, but it was wrong. The colors were dull, muted. His posture was slack, his powerful shoulders slumped. And his eyes… his bright, kind eyes were vacant, milky, and unfocused. A faint, sickening purple energy shimmered around his temples.

“No,” I whispered, the word catching in my throat.

The Architect had done the impossible. He had captured Superman. And he had broken him.

“Kal!” I screamed, my voice raw. “Kal, it’s me! Snap out of it! Fight him!”

He didn’t even blink. He was a statue, a puppet waiting for its master.

“Please,” I begged, tears streaming down my face. “Kal, you have to help us! Diana and me! Please, cousin!”

The Architect laughed, a rich, hearty sound that was more terrifying than any threat. “He can’t hear you, my dear. But he can obey me.” He looked at the Man of Steel. “Superman. Your cousin has been disobedient. Teach her a lesson.”

My blood ran cold. Superman turned his head, his vacant gaze locking onto me. He floated into my cell, the door sliding open for him. Even weakened, the sheer power radiating from him was immense. He was still Superman. And he was going to kill me.

He advanced. I scrambled backwards, but there was nowhere to go. His first blow was a simple, open-handed shove. It felt like being hit by a speeding train. I flew across the cell and slammed into the far wall with a sickening crunch. He was on me before I could recover, his hand closing around my ankle. He lifted me up and, with a casual, brutal twist, snapped my leg. The sound of my own femur breaking was the loudest thing I had ever heard. I shrieked, a sound of pure agony. He broke my other leg with the same detached efficiency.

Then he went for my arm. He grabbed my wrist and my shoulder and pulled. My humerus tore from its socket with a wet, grinding pop before the bone itself fractured. I was a broken doll, a heap of shattered limbs on the floor. The pain was a physical entity, a white, all-consuming fire that burned away thought and reason. I lay there, sobbing hysterically, my body a ruin.

Through the blinding haze of pain and tears, I saw Diana watching from her cell. With my one good arm, my right arm, I reached out towards her, my fingers trembling. “Diana… please…” I whimpered. “Please… help…”

The Architect stepped over my broken body, observing my pathetic gesture. “You still seek comfort from your fellow failure?” he mused. He looked into Diana’s cell. “Wonder Woman. A demonstration of compliance. Go to her. Break her other arm.”

I watched in absolute horror as Diana stood up, her movements stiff, robotic. She entered my cell and knelt beside me. I could see the tear tracking down her face, the agony in her own soul, but her body was not her own. She took my outstretched, unbroken arm in her powerful hands. Her grip was gentle, her touch a memory of the friend she once was.

“Diana, no, please,” I begged.

She looked into my eyes, and I saw a universe of regret. Then, with a smooth, practiced motion, she twisted my arm until the bone snapped. My final scream was choked off by a sob. I was completely broken, all four limbs shattered, lying helpless at the feet of my two closest friends.

The Architect looked down at me, then at his two mind-controlled heroes. He smiled, his masterpiece complete. He turned his attention to Superman.

“Your work here is done, but your mission is just beginning,” he commanded. “Go. Find every member of the Justice League. Batman. Flash. Green Lantern. All of them. And kill them all.”

My mind fractured. “NO!” I shrieked from the floor. “KAL, NO! DON’T DO IT! PLEASE! NOT THEM!”

Superman turned, his red cape sweeping around him, and without a backward glance, he flew up and out of a hatch in the ceiling. He was gone. Gone to murder our friends. Gone to dismantle our legacy.

I lay on the cold floor, a puddle of broken bones and limitless despair. I watched him go, my last hope becoming the instrument of my world’s destruction. The pain from my limbs was nothing compared to the agony in my soul. The Architect had won. He hadn’t just dismantled me. He had used me, and the people I loved, to dismantle hope itself. And I was left to lie in the ruins, listening to the silence where my hero used to be.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 5

My tears had dried, leaving salty tracks on my skin. The hysteria had passed, leaving behind a brittle, hollow shell. The Architect stood before me, his face a mask of detached curiosity.

“Your spirit is fractured,” he said, “but the body’s conditioning is incomplete. You must learn your place in the choreography of pain.”

Before I could process his words, his hand lashed out. Not a punch, but an open-handed slap. The crack echoed in the silent cell, my head snapping to the side with the force of it. The sting was sharp, but the humiliation was a burning fire. He was striking me as one would discipline a misbehaving pet. He hit me again, a hard, punishing blow that sent me stumbling.

He grabbed me by the hair and threw me against the wall. The impact jarred my teeth, my weakened body absorbing the full, brutal force. I slumped to the floor, dazed.

Some vestige of the hero I was, some muscle memory, sparked to life. I scrambled to my feet, my bare feet providing little purchase on the smooth floor, and threw a punch. It was a pathetic, clumsy swing, devoid of the cosmic force it once held. He caught my fist in his hand, his grip like iron, and twisted my arm, forcing me to my knees.

“You see?” he said, his voice low and menacing. “There is nothing left. No strength. No steel.”

He looked down at the ‘S’ on my chest, the proud symbol of my heritage, now just a piece of fabric. With his free hand, he hooked his fingers under the edge of the shield and ripped it from my chest. The sound of the tough Kryptonian weave tearing was a final, rending sound in my soul. He had torn my heart out. He held the iconic red and yellow emblem in his hand for a moment before dropping it to the floor like a piece of trash. I stared at the empty, raw space on the blue fabric of my leotard, and a wave of shame so profound washed over me that I wished the floor would swallow me whole. My beautiful body, a gift from Krypton, was just flesh, and it was his to damage as he pleased.

“Now the preparation is complete,” he announced.

The all-too-familiar beam of yellow sun bathed me, knitting my new bruises and scrapes, but it could not mend the shredded fabric of my suit or my spirit. A compartment opened, and a new costume was presented. A perfect replica of my own, but it felt like a cheap Halloween costume. The fabric was thin, the colors too bright. The ‘S’ shield was a separate piece of molded plastic.

“Put it on,” he ordered.

My hands trembling, I obeyed. I pulled on the flimsy suit, the feel of it a constant insult. I attached the plastic shield where my birthright used to be. I was a mockery, a cheap imitation of myself. I was cosplaying as Supergirl in the ruins of my own life.

“It is time to meet your first paying customer,” the Architect said as the main gate to my cell rumbled open.

A monster shambled in. He was immense, a hulking giant of pale, gray flesh, his clothes little more than tattered rags. His eyes were dull, black pits of mindless malice. Solomon Grundy.

The camera drones whirred to life.

Grundy roared and charged. I tried to fly, to evade, but I was grounded, weak. His first blow, a fist the size of a cinder block, sent me flying across the room. I hit the wall and crumpled. He was on me in an instant, dragging me up, his grip like a vise. He slammed me into the floor, again and again. Each impact was a universe of pain, my bones rattling, my head swimming in a sea of agony.

He held me up by my throat, his other hand grabbing my left arm. He grinned a broken-toothed grin and simply… bent it. A wet, sickening snap echoed in the cell, followed by my own high-pitched, piercing scream. The pain was a supernova, a white-hot, blinding agony that erased the world. My arm hung at an impossible angle, the bone clearly shattered. Tears of pure, physical torment mixed with the blood trickling from my lip as I collapsed, cradling my broken limb.

Grundy grunted, satisfied with his work, and lumbered out of the cell.

The beam of yellow light returned, lancing my arm with the excruciating pain of accelerated healing. Once I was whole again, the robotic arms returned me to my cell, the door sealing shut. The phantom pain of the break still lingered, a ghost of the agony I had endured.

I sat there, broken and weeping, until the monitor on the wall flickered on. It showed Diana’s cell. The gate opened, and Solomon Grundy shambled in.

My heart stopped. I watched, helpless, as Diana, clad in her own perfect replica armor, met his charge. She didn’t have my raw power, but she had a warrior’s soul. She moved with a deadly grace, evading his clumsy swings, her replica bracelets deflecting a blow that would have shattered my skull. She fought with a skill and ferocity that defied her weakened state, landing precise, powerful strikes that staggered the behemoth. For a fleeting moment, I felt a spark of hope. She was Wonder Woman. She would win.

But Grundy was relentless. He felt no pain. He simply absorbed her attacks, his own brutal blows eventually finding their mark. A devastating punch sent her reeling. Another broke through her guard, and she fell. He was on her then, his fists rising and falling like pistons. He beat her, breaking her down with the same mindless brutality he had used on me.

I watched as the greatest warrior I had ever known was pummeled into unconsciousness on the floor of her cell. I saw her perfect, replica armor dent and break. I saw her fall.

And in that moment, I understood. The hope I felt was a lie. There was no winning here. There was no escape. Skill, spirit, strength—none of it mattered. The Architect had created a system where failure was the only possible outcome. We were rats in his maze, and the only exit was more pain.

My tears were no longer for myself. They were for her. For Diana. For the very idea that a hero could ever win against such calculated, endless cruelty. I pressed my face against the transparent wall that separated us, my own reflection showing a terrified girl in a cheap costume. I watched the monster leave Diana’s broken body, knowing that tomorrow, or the day after, it would be my turn again. And then hers. A perfect, unbreakable, eternal cycle of defeat. And a new, deeper, and more profound layer of hopelessness settled over me, as cold and as final as the grave.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 4

The Architect left me in the cold silence for what felt like hours, allowing the terror and revulsion to fester in my soul. When he returned, it was with the silent, whirring robotic arms. They moved with an unnerving purpose, binding my wrists and ankles to a cold, metal table that had risen from the floor. I was laid out like a sacrifice, completely immobilized.

“We can’t have you damaging the merchandise further,” the Architect’s voice stated calmly from a speaker. A panel opened in the ceiling, and a focused beam of pure, yellow sun energy shone down, enveloping my broken foot.

The healing was violent. I felt bones grind and reset, flesh knit itself together at a supernatural rate. The pain was immense, but fleeting. In less than a minute, my foot was whole again, flawless and anatomically perfect, as if the injury had never happened. The beam of light vanished, plunging me back into the cold weakness of the Red Sun environment.

Then, the cell door opened, and he walked in. He knelt by the table, his eyes fixed on my newly restored foot.

“Pristine,” he whispered, his voice thick with a disturbing possessiveness. He reached out and took my bare foot in his hands. His touch was warm, a horrifying contrast to the cold metal of the restraints. I tried to pull away, a useless, pathetic struggle. “Perfectly formed. Not a single callus or imperfection. The skin is like silk.”

My stomach churned with disgust. His thumbs stroked the high, graceful arch of my foot, sending shudders of revulsion through my entire body. No. Please, no. Get away from me. My thoughts were a frantic, silent scream. He lowered his head, and I felt his warm breath on my sole. My mind went blank with horror. Then, I felt the wet, hot slick of his tongue as he licked a slow stripe from my heel to the base of my toes.

A strangled, guttural sound of pure revulsion escaped my throat. This was a violation so profound, so grotesquely intimate, that it eclipsed the pain of my broken bones, the humiliation of the kiss. He was tasting me, savoring me like a piece of fruit. He began to play with my toes, his fingers callously manipulating them, while his gaze remained locked on my face, drinking in my horror.

Tears streamed from my eyes, hot and unrestrained. I was no longer Supergirl. I was just a thing, an object for this monster’s sickening appetites.

“Ah, tears,” he said, seeing my breakdown. “The purest expression of truth. Let’s share your truth with the world, shall we?”

He gestured to the transparent wall of my cell. It flickered to life, becoming a monitor. I saw my own face, tear-streaked and terrified. I saw him, holding my foot, touching me. A viewer count in the corner was ticking past one billion. My private hell was a global spectacle.

Then, the poll appeared. THE FATE OF SUPERGIRL. The options: [ LET HER GO ] or [ DISMANTLE HER COMPLETELY ].

“Let’s see what humanity chooses today,” the Architect sneered.

The results were immediate and brutal. The bar for “[ DISMANTLE HER COMPLETELY ]” surged, a tidal wave of cruelty. 80%. 90%. It settled at a soul-crushing 94%. They wanted this. They wanted to see me broken.

My eyes darted to the cell next to mine, to the only person who could possibly understand. “Diana!” I cried out, my voice cracking with desperation. “Diana, please! Do something! Help me!”

Wonder Woman’s vacant eyes shifted, and for a fleeting second, they focused on me. I saw a flicker of something ancient and powerful, a spark of the hero she was. Her expression didn’t change, but a single, perfect tear welled in her eye and traced a silent path down her cheek. It was a tear of utter impotence. She was as much a prisoner as I was.

The flicker of hope died, plunging me into an even deeper despair.

“She can’t help you,” the Architect said softly. He stood and walked over to Diana’s cell. A small slot opened, and he reached inside, pulling out the glowing, golden Lasso of Truth. My blood turned to ice.

He brought it back to my cell and, with a chilling reverence, he put the lasso around my arm. The warm magic of Hestia flooded me, compelling honesty.

“The world is watching, Kara,” he whispered in my ear. “They have voted. They want the truth. So tell them. Tell them the truth about what you, a daughter of the advanced, enlightened Krypton, truly think when you look at their chaotic, self-destructive, garbage planet.”

The lasso tightened. The question was a trap, and I was caught in it. My own trauma, my betrayal, the sight of Diana’s brokenness, the world’s cruel vote—it all swirled into a bitter, truthful answer forced from my lips.

“They’re… violent,” I choked out, the words feeling like acid. “They’re primitive. They betrayed her… they’re betraying me… Compared to Krypton… this planet… is a cesspool of hate. I hate… I hate this garbage planet!”

The words hung in the air, a perversion of my love for Earth, twisted by his cruel prompt and my current agony.

“And scene,” the Architect said, a triumphant smirk on his face as he tapped a button on his wrist. The monitor showing the live stream went black. He swiftly removed the lasso from my arm.

“NO!” I screamed, realizing what he had done. “That’s not what I meant! You twisted my words! I love this world! I didn’t mean it!”

But no one could hear me. The world had seen the Girl of Steel, the smiling immigrant hero, declare her hatred for them all. He had not just broken my body; he had poisoned my soul and murdered my name. Bad actors, conspiracy theorists, and hateful opportunists would edit the clips. I would be a monster forever.

The realization struck me with the force of a physical blow, and my mind finally, completely, shattered. A hysterical, wailing sob broke from me, the sound of a spirit being torn in two. I was no longer crying from pain or fear, but from the death of everything I had ever stood for.

The Architect watched my total mental collapse with deep satisfaction. He had won. He had dismantled me completely. He reached out and placed a hand on my trembling thigh, a final, quiet gesture of ownership.

“Good girl,” he said softly.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 3

The heavy cell door slid shut with a sound of absolute finality, sealing me in my transparent prison. My breath came in ragged, painful gasps. The fire in my broken foot was a roaring inferno, a constant, sickening reminder of my own fragility. My eyes were locked on the cell next to mine. On Diana.

She was exactly as he’d shown me on the monitor, yet somehow infinitely more horrifying in person. There were no visible wounds on her. Her skin was flawless, her iconic armor pristine, her powerful limbs showing no sign of injury. She looked like a goddess on display in a museum. But her eyes… her eyes were voids. They were staring into nothing, completely devoid of the fire and compassion I knew lived in her. She was a perfectly healed body wrapped around a soul that had been murdered. I was looking at my future.

A soft hiss announced the opening of my own cell door. My head snapped around, my heart hammering against my ribs. It was him. The Architect. He stepped inside, no hologram this time, but a physical man dressed in a severe, dark suit. He moved with a liquid grace, an unnerving calm that spoke of absolute control. The air grew cold, heavy with his presence.

“Much better,” he said, his gaze sweeping over me, making my skin crawl. “Theatricality has its place, but for a proper appraisal, one requires proximity.”

I scrambled backwards, my broken foot dragging uselessly, until my back hit the cold, hard wall. I was cornered. “Stay away from me,” I whispered, the words trembling, all my earlier defiance incinerated by pain and terror.

He ignored me, his eyes fixated on my shoulders. “Let’s begin by removing these cumbersome accessories.”

His hands, cool and dry, reached for the clasps that held my cape. I flinched violently, a choked sob escaping my lips. He was unphased. With two precise clicks, the heavy red fabric fell away from my body, pooling on the floor behind me like a shroud of shed hope. The loss of its familiar weight made me feel naked, exposed.

“And this,” he said, his fingers moving to the latch of my skirt at my waist. “An unnecessary flourish.”

He unfastened it, and the red skirt joined the cape on the floor. I was left in only the blue, high-cut leotard and my ruined red briefs, the iconic ‘S’ on my chest now feeling like a target. I wrapped my arms around myself, a futile attempt to ward off his predatory gaze. This was so much worse than the fight. The pain from my foot was a wildfire, but this humiliation was a creeping frost, freezing my very soul.

“There now,” he murmured, stepping closer. He knelt before me, bringing his face level with mine. “Let’s have a look at my prize.”

He reached out, and a finger, cold as steel, traced the line of my jaw. I trembled uncontrollably, tears welling in my eyes. He wasn’t looking at me like a person. He was looking at me like an object, a thing he had acquired.

“Remarkable,” he whispered, his eyes cataloging every detail. “The skin is flawless, save for the… recent damage.” He gestured vaguely toward my face. “Such a youthful complexion. There’s a luminescence to it, a cellular vibrancy that speaks to your solar-powered nature. You are quite literally glowing with life.” His hand moved to my shoulder, his thumb stroking the curve of my deltoid. “The muscle tone is exquisite. Not the hardened physique of a lifetime warrior like your neighbor,” he nodded toward Diana’s cell, “but the lithe, powerful grace of a natural predator. Untrained, perhaps, but brimming with raw potential. You are a truly beautiful creature, Kara Zor-El.”

Every word was a violation, a clinical dissection of my being that left me feeling stripped bare to the bone. I wasn’t a warrior. I wasn’t Diana. I didn’t have her stoic fury, her millennia of training to build a fortress in my mind. I was just a girl, far from home, and I was terrified. The tears I had been fighting began to fall freely, hot tracks of shame on my cold skin.

He saw the fear in my eyes, and he smiled. It was the smile of a man who had proven a theory. He leaned in closer, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “This is the look I wanted to see. Not defiance. Pure, honest terror. It’s so much more authentic.”

He lifted my chin with his finger, forcing my gaze to meet his. His eyes were empty of all emotion except a chilling, possessive satisfaction. He was going to brand me, to mark me as his property in a way no physical blow could.

He leaned in and pressed his lips to mine.

A wave of revulsion so powerful it made me gag surged through my body. The kiss was not passionate or violent; it was cold, sterile, an act of finality. It was the seal on a contract I never signed, the pressing of a claim. It was the ultimate expression of his power and my complete lack of it. I was frozen, trapped, a statue being defiled by its creator.

When he pulled back, he left the ghost of his touch on my lips, a contamination that I knew would never wash away. I was shaking, shattered, my mind a maelstrom of horror and disgust.

He stood up, smoothing his suit jacket. “Now you understand,” he said softly. “Rest. We will begin preparing you for your public debut soon.”

He turned and walked out of the cell, the door hissing shut behind him, leaving me alone with the ghost of his touch, the throbbing agony in my foot, and the silent, terrifying spectacle of the perfectly healed, perfectly broken woman in the cell next to mine. The defiant Supergirl was gone. All that was left was a terrified girl named Kara, who had just learned what true powerlessness felt like.

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 2

The crushing weight was immense, a force my body was never meant to endure. Every cell, starved of the nourishing light of a yellow sun, screamed in protest. But fear was a luxury I couldn’t afford. I lifted my head, a millimeter at a time, and glared at the hologram of the man who called himself the Architect.

“You think this will hold me?” I forced the words out, my voice strained but defiant. “You think a light show and some heavy gravity can stop me? I’m Supergirl. I don’t lose. When I get out of this, and I will get out of this, you are going to pay.”

The Architect’s holographic image smiled, a thin, condescending curve of his lips. “Such fire. Such youthful, misplaced confidence. It’s the primary characteristic of your particular brand of hero. You believe your will is an indomitable force. Allow me to disabuse you of that notion.”

The hologram vanished. For a moment, there was only the hum of the red sun lamps and the groan of the gravity plates. Then, from panels in the ceiling directly above me, two sleek, multi-jointed robotic arms descended. They were matte black, ending in terrifyingly dexterous manipulators that whirred silently as they moved towards my feet.

“What are you doing?” I spat, trying to pull my legs away, a useless gesture that achieved nothing.

“The first step in deconstruction,” the Architect’s voice echoed through the chamber, “is the removal of artifice. Your boots, for instance. They are a symbol of your journey, your heroic stride. Let’s see what lies beneath.”

The robotic arms reached my red boots. They didn’t grab or tear. One arm’s manipulators, with the delicacy of a watchmaker, began to unlace the side of my right boot, pulling the yellow laces free with hypnotic precision. The other held my ankle in place. I felt sickened, my defiance curdling into disgust. This detached, mechanical violation felt colder than any fist.

Slowly, the boot was peeled away from my calf and slid off my foot. The cool, recycled air of the chamber hit my bare skin.

“Ah,” the Architect’s voice purred. “Perfection. Just as the simulations predicted.”

My feet, unlike Diana’s, had never known a moment of hardship. They’d never been calloused by training or scarred by battle. They were, by any definition, perfect. The skin was smooth and unblemished, the arch high and gracefully curved. My toes were straight and neat, the nails pristine. They were the feet of a being who had never had to walk on rough ground, a body untouched by the wear and tear of mortality.

“Such delicate architecture,” the Architect mused as the second boot was removed with the same methodical slowness. “No imperfections. A testament to your alien physiology. So very pretty. An collector’s item.”

“You’re a monster,” I snarled, the words feeling hollow even to me. “I’m going to make you regret this.”

“No, my dear. You are not,” he replied calmly. The robotic arms repositioned. One clamped firmly around my right ankle, pinning it to the floor. The other settled over the top of my bare foot, its metallic fingers wrapping around the flawless arch. “You are going to learn what it means to be powerless.”

The pressure began. It was a slow, grinding force. My defiance faltered, replaced by a spike of pure animal fear. The pressure increased, and the delicate, perfect bones of my foot began to protest. I grit my teeth, refusing to give him the satisfaction.

He increased the pressure again. A sharp, cracking sound, sickeningly loud in the quiet room, echoed from my foot. A scream of pure, unadulterated agony was torn from my throat. It was a sound I had never made before. The pain was blinding, absolute. He was breaking me. Literally. The metal fingers squeezed harder, and the fine bones in my metatarsals ground against each other. My confident threats dissolved into raw, incoherent shrieks of pain.

He held the crushing pressure for a few more seconds before releasing. My foot was a mangle of agony. The robotic arms retracted back into the ceiling. The gravity lessened, but other arms descended, shackling my wrists and ankles in the same cold, black alloy Diana must have known. The Red Sun lamps continued to pour their weakening radiation over me.

I was lifted from the floor and transported out of the chamber, my ruined foot sending waves of nausea and fire through my body with every slight jostle. We moved through sterile corridors, a silent, humiliating procession. My body, once a vessel of near-infinite power, was now just a container for pain. The iconic ‘S’ on my chest felt like a brand of failure. My cape dragged behind me, a useless, pathetic train.

My thoughts were a chaotic storm. He showed me Diana… He broke my foot like a twig… I screamed… He said she funded this… The confident defiance was gone, washed away by a tide of agony and terror. I’m Supergirl. The thought came again, but this time it was not a declaration. It was a question, full of doubt and horror. What is Supergirl without her strength? Without her invulnerability? I was just a girl. A girl with a broken foot, a body poisoned by a red sun, being taken to a cell built from the suffering of a friend.

We arrived at a transparent door. Inside was a simple white room, identical to the one in the feed. And in the cell next to it, I saw her. A dark-haired woman in a tattered remnant of armor, chained to the wall, her face a mask of old scars. Her one remaining eye flickered towards me, holding not recognition or pity, but a terrifying, bottomless emptiness.

The door to my cell slid open. As the robotic arms pushed me inside, the full, crushing weight of my predicament slammed into me. This was real. This was happening. The Architect’s final words from the control room echoed in my mind.

“Welcome home, Kara Zor-El.”

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Supergirl’s Dismantling Part 1

The sun over the Mojave was a welcome friend, a torrent of pure, golden energy that soaked into my skin and made the cells of my body sing. Down below, the mirrored arrays of the Sol-Gen Alpha facility spread for miles, a glittering testament to human ingenuity. It was a place of power, a symbol of a brighter future. Today, it was a ticking time bomb.

My uniform felt like a second skin, the tough, flexible Kryptonian weave moving with me as I flew. The red of my cape snapped smartly in the wind, a vibrant banner against the endless blue sky. On my chest, the sigil of the House of El felt warm, a familiar weight of promise and duty. It was a good day to save the world.

The call had been frantic. A feedback loop in the primary collection tower, a core overload, a potential detonation that would vaporize half of Nevada and blot out the sun with radioactive dust. A job for me.

I landed softly on the platform ringing the central tower, the heat wash from the structure making the air shimmer. Inside, through reinforced plasteel, I could see the core: a miniature sun, blazing with furious, unstable energy. My senses, a billion times sharper than any human’s, confirmed the diagnosis. The containment fields were fluctuating wildly.

“Don’t worry,” I said into my comms unit, my voice calm and reassuring. “I’ve got this.”

My body was a conduit of stellar power. I braced myself, feeling the limitless strength in my limbs, and pressed my hands against the vibrating outer casing of the containment vessel. My plan was simple: physically reinforce the failing fields while using my own body to absorb and safely vent the excess solar radiation. I was a living battery, and this was a storm I was built to weather.

The energy poured into me, a familiar, exhilarating rush. I could feel the pressure on the fields stabilizing under the unyielding strength of my arms. My heat vision, focused to a pencil-thin beam, began to carefully weld a fractured conduit back together. Everything was proceeding as planned.

That’s when I felt the first subtle shift.

It wasn’t a sudden change, but a slow, creeping alteration in the quality of the light. The brilliant, life-giving gold of the core began to feel… different. Harsher. The energy I was absorbing no longer felt like pure power; it had a strange, discordant resonance, like a beautiful song played subtly out of tune. A wave of unusual fatigue, alien and unwelcome, washed through me. My heat vision flickered for a nanosecond.

I pushed the feeling aside, attributing it to the sheer scale of the energy I was channeling. But the feeling grew. The light from the core was shifting, a barely perceptible drift down the spectrum. My skin, which always craved the sun, began to feel prickly and raw, as if suffering from a strange, internal sunburn. A cold dread, something I hadn’t felt since I first saw a green Kryptonite meteor, began to coil in my stomach.

The vibrant blue of my uniform seemed to darken in the strange new light. The ‘S’ on my chest, usually a source of comfort, suddenly felt heavy, like a tombstone. My strength, my boundless Kryptonian strength, was becoming… finite. The immense pressure I was holding back was no longer effortless to contain. My muscles began to ache with a deep, burning strain. My bones, which could withstand the pressure of a deep-sea trench, felt dense and brittle.

The light was no longer gold. It was a sickening, angry red.

The truth hit me with the force of a physical blow. This wasn’t an accident. It was a trap. The facility wasn’t a power plant; it was a weapon. A Red Sun weapon.

Before I could even try to fly, to escape, the second stage of the trap sprung. With a deafening groan of tortured metal, the floor beneath my feet glowed with a grid of energy lines. An immense, invisible weight slammed down on me, buckling my knees and driving me to the ground with shocking force. Gravity plating. Dialed to a level that would crush a tank into a dinner plate.

My cape billowed once before being pinned uselessly beneath me. My face was pressed against the hot, grimy metal floor. Every ounce of my rapidly fading strength was focused on simply not being crushed into paste. A pained grunt was torn from my throat. My body, once a paradigm of invulnerability, was screaming in agony. I could feel the crushing pressure on my spine, the strain on my joints.

A hologram flickered to life in front of me, projecting the image of a calm, unassuming man in a tailored suit. He looked at my prone, struggling form with the dispassionate air of a scientist observing a specimen.

“Kara Zor-El,” he said, his voice smooth and cold. “They call me the Architect. Welcome to my laboratory.”

Panic, raw and desperate, flooded me. I tried to push myself up, my hands scraping against the floor. It was like trying to lift a mountain.

“Please don’t strain yourself,” the Architect continued, a cruel hint of pity in his voice. “The gravity is precisely calibrated to your diminishing strength profile. The Red Sun radiation flooding this chamber is, I’m afraid, quite thorough. You are, for all intents and purposes, merely human now. A very strong human, perhaps, but a fragile one nonetheless.”

“Who… why…?” I gasped out, the words crushed by the pressure on my lungs.

“Why?” He smiled faintly. “Because symbols of hope are a fascinating thing to deconstruct. And because your predecessor was so very… profitable.”

The holographic image shifted. For a single, soul-shattering second, it showed a live feed of a darkened cell. In it was a woman, broken and hollow-eyed, chained to a wall. Her face was a ruin of scar tissue, but there was no mistaking the regal structure of her bones, the dark hair, the bearing of a warrior, even in defeat. Diana.

My blood ran cold. The stories, the rumors of her disappearance… they were true. This man… he…

The Architect’s image returned. “She funded your capture, you see. Her suffering built this cage. A cage I assure you, you will come to know even more intimately than she knows hers.”

I lay pinned under the weight of a synthetic world, bathed in the light of a dying star, my body screaming, my hope shattering. The vibrant colors of my uniform were now muted with grime and shadow. The proud ‘S’ on my chest was pressed into the dirt. I was a daughter of the House of El, a champion of Earth, and I had flown into a cage made of physics and cruelty, a cage built from the bones of another hero’s suffering. And as the gravity intensified just a little more, I knew this was only the beginning.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Finale

The cycle was the only truth left. Wake, heal, weaken, dress. The flood of divine energy was no longer a relief, just a biological process I was forced to undergo. The mending of my flesh, the sealing of my wounds, was like a janitor cleaning a slaughterhouse floor before the next day’s butchery. The subsequent severing of that power was a familiar, cold plunge. I was an empty cup, filled and emptied by the same cruel hand, over and over.

I no longer fought when they brought the costume. The cheap pleather of the boots felt like a second skin. The plastic belt was a familiar weight. The dead rope of the lasso, the tin tiara—they were my uniform. My job was to bleed, and this was the uniform for my work. My mind, once a fortress of strategy and hope, was now a quiet, gray plain. There was no rage left, no despair, only the serene, hollow acceptance of my function.

The Architect appeared on a large monitor, not from within the facility, but from somewhere… luxurious. He was no longer in his severe suit. He wore a plush silk robe, a glass of amber liquid in his hand. Behind him, through a panoramic window, was a turquoise sea and a pristine white-sand beach.

“Greetings, my asset,” he slurred, a smug, self-satisfied smile on his face. “I do apologize for not being there in person, but the sunsets from my private island in the Maldives are simply too exquisite to miss. Your last encounter with the Grapple-Gangs of Blüdhaven was wildly profitable. It just paid for a new yacht. I believe I’ll name it ‘The Diana’.”

He took a slow sip. “The world loves a tragedy, my dear. And you are the greatest tragedy ever told. A goddess brought low, bleeding for the amusement of the highest bidder. It’s poetry.”

My face remained placid. His flaunting, his wealth, his words—they were stones dropped into a bottomless well. They simply vanished inside my emptiness.

“But business is business,” he continued, his tone shifting. “And tonight’s client has paid a premium for a truly… transformative experience. Prepare the asset.”

The gate opened. A figure in a fully enclosed, corrosion-proof environmental suit waddled in. He was bulky, not with muscle, but with tanks and tubing. A heavy backpack fed hoses into two nozzle-like guns mounted on his gauntlets. Green, viscous liquid bubbled inside the transparent canisters. This was Caustic.

The drones took their positions. The show began.

I stood in the center of the room, my posture straight, my expression vacant. I was ready.

Caustic didn’t bother with preamble. He raised his left arm and fired. A thick jet of green acid shot through the air. I didn’t even try to dodge. The stream hit my right leg. The replica boot sizzled, melted, and dissolved into black slag in less than a second. Then the acid touched my skin.

There are no words in any language for that kind of pain. It was not a cut, or a burn, or a break. It was the pain of unmaking. I watched, with detached horror, as my own flesh blackened, blistered, and then began to liquefy, sloughing off the bone in smoking, gelatinous clumps. A scream, primal and inhuman, tore through my quiet acceptance. My body still knew how to feel, even if my soul had given up.

I fell, clutching the ruin of my leg. He fired again. A splash caught my shoulder and chest. The fake eagle emblem on my breastplate dissolved, and the acid ate into my flesh beneath, the pain so immense it felt like my entire nervous system was on fire. He walked closer, a methodical exterminator. He kicked me onto my back and aimed downwards.

“They want to see your face,” he rasped through his suit’s vocoder.

The stream of acid hit the left side of my face. The world became a universe of white-hot, sizzling agony. The pain was absolute, eclipsing thought, memory, everything. I felt the skin of my cheek and brow melt away. The horrifying sizzle was next to my ear. My left eye burst in a flash of searing light and then darkness. Tears from my remaining eye streamed down my face, mixing with the blood from my ravaged skin and the clear, horrifying fluid weeping from my dissolving tissues.

My body convulsed on the floor, a ruined thing twitching in a puddle of gore and chemical waste. I was beautiful, they once said. The ‘face of a goddess’. Now, half of it was a crater of smoking, bubbling ruin. Through the one eye I had left, I watched as Caustic, his work complete, turned and exited the chamber.

The pain was everything. It was the air I breathed, the world I saw. And in the center of that fire, the Architect’s voice returned, soft and intimate from the speaker above.

“Magnificent,” he whispered. “A true masterpiece of deconstruction. The market will go wild.”

I lay there, broken beyond any hope of repair, my life-fluids pooling on the floor.

“You must be wondering what the point of all this is,” he said, his voice turning philosophical again. “The yachts, the islands… they are merely perks. The real profit, my dear Diana, was the seed money. All the capital I have raised, all the technology I have perfected by testing it on you, was for a singular purpose.”

He paused, letting the silence hang in the air, thick with the smell of my own dissolving flesh.

“It was to build a trap not for an Amazon, but for a Kryptonian. All this money you have made for me will fund the acquisition of my next asset.”

A new monitor flickered to life. It didn’t show my broken form or his island paradise. It showed a live feed of a young woman with a familiar red ‘S’ on her chest, smiling as she helped rescue a cat from a tree in National City. Kara. My friend. Young, bright, hopeful Kara.

“She’ll be here soon,” the Architect’s voice whispered, a final blade twisting in what was left of my heart. “And you’ll have a front-row seat. You will watch as I do this to her. Day after day. You won’t be alone anymore.”

And in that moment, I found it. A place beyond acceptance. A hell deeper than any poet could imagine. The quiet, gray plain of my mind was set ablaze. Not with hope, not with defiance, but with a new, infinite agony. The agony of being a helpless witness. My one remaining eye stared at Kara’s smiling face on the screen, and for the first time in a long time, I began to scream. And I knew, with a certainty that burned hotter than the acid eating my bones, that I would never, ever stop.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 6

The abyss of unconsciousness was my only solace, a fleeting mercy in an eternity of pain. But even that was now denied me. I was wrenched back into existence by a foreign, yet achingly familiar, sensation: power. A trickle of divine energy, warm and golden, was being fed back into my system. I felt bones that had been shattered knit themselves together with impossible speed. Deep gashes and wounds sealed over, leaving smooth, unblemished skin in their wake. The chronic, grinding ache in my feet vanished, replaced by strength. For a few precious seconds, I was whole. I was me.

The sensation was a lie, a drug administered by my jailer. As soon as my body was fully restored to its peak physical condition—a perfect, living statue of sculpted muscle and divine proportion—the connection was severed. The warmth vanished, plunging me back into the cold, profound weakness of a mortal. The nanites reasserted their dominance, leaving me trembling and gasping on the floor, a perfectly restored engine with no fuel.

“A pristine canvas is so much more appealing for the artist, don’t you agree?” the Architect’s voice echoed from a speaker. A compartment in the wall slid open, presenting not my true armor, but a mockery of it. A cheap replica.

The ritual began. My compliance was born of utter exhaustion. I pulled on the stiff, molded pleather boots that mimicked my own, the material chafing my skin where blessed leather once sat. The belt was plastic, its “golden” finish already flaking at the edges. The lasso was a simple nylon rope, dyed gold, cold and dead in my hands. The final insult was the tiara, a flimsy piece of metal with a plastic star that I had to place on my own brow. I looked in the reflection of the polished floor. To the cameras, I was Wonder Woman, vibrant and ready for battle. But I felt like a ghost haunting my own skin, a blasphemous effigy of myself.

The gate ground open. “Tonight’s patron has a particular appreciation for aesthetics,” the Architect announced. “He prefers his art… incised. Allow me to present, for a staggering sum, the mercenary known as Lacerate.”

The figure that emerged was a nightmare of chrome and flesh. He was lean and wiry, his body a patchwork of cybernetic enhancements. His legs were digitigrade, like a raptor’s, allowing for explosive, unnatural speed. But my eyes were drawn to his arms. From knuckles to elbows, his gauntlets were fitted with a series of long, wicked blades that hummed with a low, vibrating energy.

The red lights of the drones blinked to life. Showtime.

Lacerate didn’t charge; he blurred. He was on me before I could even fully register his movement. The first blow wasn’t a punch, but a sweeping arc of his arm. The vibro-blades sang as they sliced through the fake fabric of my bodice and bit into the flesh of my abdomen.

The pain was clean, sharp, and terrifyingly deep. A searing line of fire erupted across my stomach. I staggered back, looking down to see a perfectly straight, crimson line welling with blood, staining the blue of my mock costume. He was already moving again, a whirlwind of silver and red. A slash across my back forced a scream from my lungs. Another across my thigh, deep enough that I felt the muscle itself sever. My leg buckled, sending me to one knee.

He was toying with me, a surgeon of sadism. He wasn’t trying to bludgeon me into unconsciousness like Blockbuster. He was methodically, artistically, carving me apart. Each cut was precise, aimed to cripple and bleed. My beautiful, powerful body, moments ago perfectly healed, was being methodically ruined. The skin of my arms was cross-hatched with bleeding cuts. A deep gash on my shoulder exposed the white of bone beneath.

I was too slow. My weakness was a leaden cloak I couldn’t cast off. I swung a desperate, clumsy punch, and he simply danced away, his cybernetic legs carrying him just out of reach before he darted back in, his blades opening another wound along my ribs.

Just kill me, my mind pleaded, a mantra of silent surrender. Drive one of those blades through my heart. End the performance.

But death was not what the client had paid for. He had paid to dismantle me. He spun, his leg sweeping around in a graceful, deadly kick. The blades on his greaves connected with my side, carving a deep, horizontal furrow from my hip to my armpit. The agony was absolute. My vision swam in a red haze. I collapsed onto my side, my breath coming in ragged, wet sobs. Blood pooled beneath me, warm and slick on the cold white floor.

Lacerate stood over me, his chest heaving slightly, the humming of his blades the only sound besides my own wretched gasps. He admired his handiwork, the masterpiece of ruin he had made of my body. For a final flourish, he pressed the tip of one blade against the smooth, powerful curve of my calf, and slowly, deliberately, carved his initial—a stylized ‘L’—into my flesh.

The pain was secondary to the humiliation. I was no longer a warrior. I was not even a victim. I was a canvas. A piece of meat to be autographed by my destroyer.

He retracted his blades and gave a slight bow toward a hidden camera before turning and striding out of the gate. It slammed shut, leaving me alone. Alone in my fake costume, lying in a puddle of my own real blood, my body a roadmap of excruciating wounds.

The desire for death was still there, a dull ember in the ashes of my soul. But a new, more horrifying realization dawned. The Architect wouldn’t let me die. He would just let the divine energy trickle back in, seal the cuts, mend the muscle, erase the scars, and then dress me in this clown’s costume to be torn apart all over again.

This wasn’t just defeat. This wasn’t an execution. This was my eternity. A cycle of perfect healing and perfect destruction, performed for an audience that had once called me their hero. I laid my head on the floor, the metallic tang of my own blood filling my senses, and for the first time, I did not pray for death. I simply accepted that my hell had no end.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 5

Time had lost all meaning in the white, sterile purgatory. The Architect’s voice, the hum of the lights, and the ceaseless, grinding pain in the arches of my feet were the only constants. My body, a vessel once brimming with divine power, was now just a canvas for his art of cruelty. It remained strong, a testament to its Amazonian design, but it was a strength that only prolonged the suffering. My skin, though still resilient, was a tapestry of faded yellow and purple bruises from lessons I could no longer distinguish. My muscles, starved of the gods’ fire, were perpetually sore, the lean, powerful lines softened by exhaustion and malnutrition.

Hope was a distant memory, a concept from another life. The betrayal of the world had hollowed me out, leaving nothing but a fragile shell of the woman I once was.

The door to my chamber hissed open. The Architect entered, his tailored suit immaculate, his presence a fresh wave of despair. The clamps on my feet tightened viciously, sending a jolt of agony through my system, a cruel demand for my attention. I didn’t even have the energy to gasp anymore, only to tremble.

“Good morning, specimen,” he said, consulting a tablet. “Excellent ratings from the last compliance session. The market for your suffering, it seems, is insatiable. Which brings us to the next phase of our enterprise.”

He gestured to a large wall panel that I hadn’t noticed before. It slid away, revealing a heavily reinforced gate.

“I have proven my thesis on the baseness of the common man,” he continued, his voice dripping with condescending pride. “Now, I cater to a more discerning clientele. Your former adversaries, the criminal underworld… they are willing to pay astronomical sums for a unique opportunity. The chance to fight, and defeat, a legend.”

My blood ran cold. He wasn’t just my tormentor anymore. He was my purveyor.

“Of course,” he added with a thin smile, “we must ensure a fair contest.” He tapped his tablet, and I felt the nanites in my system surge, a wave of profound weakness washing over me, bringing me to my knees. “Your power levels will be… adjusted accordingly. It wouldn’t do to have the clients feel cheated.”

The gate ground open. A hulking figure stepped through, and my heart, what was left of it, sank. It was Blockbuster. His brutish face was split by a sadistic grin, his massive, grotesquely muscled frame radiating malice. In my prime, he was a challenge, but a manageable one. In this state, he was a death sentence.

As if on cue, small, silent drones detached from the ceiling, their red recording lights blinking. The live stream. The world was watching again.

Blockbuster charged. I tried to move, to call upon the muscle memory of a thousand battles. My body responded sluggishly, my limbs feeling like lead. His first blow, a massive club-like fist, caught me in the ribs. The impact was sickening. I felt more than heard the crack of bone. The pain was sharp, blinding, stealing the air from my lungs. My body, which had once withstood the force of explosions, now broke under the fist of a common thug.

I crumpled to the floor, coughing, tasting blood. He kicked me in the stomach, rolling me over. The cameras zoomed in.

Let it end, a voice whispered in my mind. My own voice. Please, just let it be over.

He hauled me to my feet by my hair, my scalp screaming in protest. His fist smashed into my face. My head snapped back, and the world exploded in a flash of white light. I could feel the skin split over my cheekbone, the warm blood running down my face, mingling with tears I no longer tried to hold back. My body was a symphony of agony. The sharp, piercing pain of my broken ribs, the dull, throbbing torment in my feet, the fiery sting on my face, the deep, aching exhaustion in every muscle.

He hit me again. And again. I stopped trying to fight back. What was the point? Every defensive move only prolonged the beating. Every ounce of resistance only delayed the inevitable. Oblivion. That’s all I wanted. The sweet, silent darkness of the end. A final rest. The Elysian Fields felt so close, a peaceful shore after a lifetime of storms.

My inner monologue was no longer a warrior’s analysis. It was a prayer to Thanatos. Hephaestus forged my bracelets to deflect blows. Now I welcome them. Hermes gave me speed to evade my foes. Now I stand and wait for them. Athena gave me wisdom. And my only wisdom now is that this must end.

Blockbuster landed a final, devastating blow to my chest. I flew backwards, my magnificent, broken body hitting the far wall before slumping to the ground in a heap. The world began to fade to black around the edges. The jeering face of my opponent, the cold eyes of the Architect, the silent red lights of the drones… they all began to blur.

Yes, I thought, as the darkness rushed in to claim me. Finally. Peace.

Through the haze, I saw the Architect approach my prone form, checking his tablet. “Excellent,” he murmured, likely at the new flood of cryptocurrency to his accounts. “The audience appreciates verisimilitude.”

I lay in a pool of my own blood and shame, every nerve screaming, my body shattered. But for the first time in what felt like an eternity, a flicker of something other than despair touched me. It was the hope, not for rescue, not for victory, but for the sweet, final mercy of death. My breathing was shallow, my vision almost gone. My last conscious thought was a plea.

Let this be the end. Please… let me die.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 4

The throbbing agony in my feet had become a part of my existence, a hellish metronome counting the seconds of my degradation. My bleeding brow stung with every shift of my gaze. The monitors played their cruel symphony of my failure. I was a prisoner not only of the alloy but of my own broken body.

The Architect watched me, his head tilted. “The foundation is laid. The crown is removed. Now, we go deeper. To the core of the myth.” He gestured to the clamps on my feet, and with an audible whir, the pressure intensified. A fresh wave of white-hot agony surged up my legs, making my vision swim and a low moan tear from my lips. My arches felt as if they were being ground into dust. He wanted me distracted, overwhelmed by the pain in my extremities, so the next blow would land with surgical precision.

He moved to my waist. His gloved hands went to the great golden buckle of my belt, the Eagle of Zeus that my mother had fastened for me herself. It was not just a belt; in some tales, it was the very anchor of my Amazonian strength, a gift from Gaea herself. His fingers, slow and deliberate, worked the intricate clasp. It was a heavy, solid thing, a symbol of my unbreakable will. I felt it give way with a solid thunk.

He didn’t pull it off. He slowly, deliberately, unlaced it from the loops of my battle skirt, his knuckles brushing against my skin. The humiliation was a cold fire in my gut. This man was undressing me like a doll, dismantling me piece by piece. Finally, he pulled the heavy golden belt free and laid it next to my tiara. Another piece of my soul placed on display.

Hanging from the belt was the coiled form of my lasso. The Golden Perfect. The Lasso of Hestia. It glowed with a soft, internal luminescence, a light that no darkness had ever been able to extinguish. It was a part of me, a conduit for the truth that I championed. He picked it up. The light seemed to recoil from his touch, but he held it firm.

“The final symbol,” he whispered, his voice full of reverence and contempt. “An instrument that compels truth. What truth will it tell now, I wonder?”

He uncoiled it with a flick of his wrist. The golden rope, which had bound gods and monsters, slithered through the air. He didn’t use it to restrain me further; the alloy was more than sufficient. Instead, he did something far worse. He wrapped the glowing cord gently around my bare forearm. The moment it touched my skin, I felt its familiar, warm magic. But now it felt like a violation. It was being used against me.

“The Lasso compels you to speak only the truth,” he said, his face close to mine. “So, tell me. Tell the world… what do you feel, Diana of Themyscira?”

My mouth opened, but I fought to keep it shut. The lasso tightened, its magic flooding me, forcing the words out. They came out as a choked, broken whisper. “I feel… pain. Humiliation. I feel… weak.” Speaking the truth of my own degradation, forced by my most sacred tool, was a new, profound level of violation. A tear I couldn’t stop slid down my cheek.

“Ah, but which world?” he asked, a cruel smile touching his lips. He turned to the monitors. The images of my broken form vanished, replaced by a dizzying mosaic of screens from across the globe. Times Square. A pub in London. A crowded plaza in Tokyo. Living rooms in Metropolis. Phone screens in Gotham. I saw my own face, bloody and weeping, reflected in thousands of places at once. A counter at the bottom of the screen was ticking upwards at a horrifying rate: 850 million viewers. 900 million.

“Your ordeal is not a private one, Princess,” the Architect explained. “It is the single greatest media event in human history. I have shown them your power failing. I have shown them your body breaking. Now, I offer them a choice.”

On every screen in the world, and on the monitors before me, a poll appeared. The question was simple, stark, and utterly monstrous.

THE FATE OF WONDER WOMAN IS IN YOUR HANDS.

The options: [ FREE THE HERO ] or [ SHOW US THE TRUTH ]

His twisted euphemism for my continued dismantling hung in the air. This was his masterstroke. My life, my dignity, was now subject to a global vote. For a moment, a desperate, insane flicker of hope ignited in my chest. I had saved them. I had bled for them, fought for them, loved them. They would remember. They would choose mercy.

The results began to pour in.

My hope turned to ice in my veins. The bar for “[ SHOW US THE TRUTH ]” shot up. 70%. 80%. It settled at a staggering, unbelievable 92%. The other bar, “[ FREE THE HERO ]”, was a pathetic sliver.

I stared at the numbers, my mind refusing to process what my eyes were seeing. 92 percent. Billions of people. The child I’d saved from a fire, the city I’d protected from invasion, the soldiers I’d fought beside—had they all voted to see me suffer? Did they truly hate me? Or worse, did they simply not care? Was I nothing more than a spectacle? A diversion? A bloody show to entertain them on a Wednesday evening?

The pain in my feet, the sting on my brow, the shame of my nakedness—it all vanished, replaced by a cold, hollow emptiness that was more terrifying than any physical torment. My entire life, my purpose, my love for the world of men—it was all a lie. A fool’s errand. I had offered them truth, and they had chosen this. I had offered them love, and they had chosen cruelty.

Something inside me didn’t just break. It disintegrated. It turned to dust and blew away on a cold, cosmic wind. The warrior, the princess, the hero—she died in that moment, there on that cold, white platform. My vision blurred, the monitors and the room dissolving into a meaningless smear of light and color. A silent scream echoed in the hollowed-out cavern of my mind, a scream for a faith that was now dead, for a love that had been betrayed. The Architect watched, his expression serene. He had proven his thesis. He had not just dismantled my body and my symbols. He had dismantled my soul. And the worst part, the only truth that now mattered, was that the world had helped him do it.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 3

The white room was an assault on the senses. It smelled of ozone and cold sterility, a scent that promised clinical cruelty. My body, drained of its divine might, felt every ache, every point of contact with the hard platform. My muscles, starved of their power, were heavy and unresponsive. But the true torture was the monitors. My own defeat played back for me in a silent, endless loop—the strain, the collapse, the utter helplessness.

As if sensing my thoughts, the Architect gestured toward the platform I was bound to. “A foundation of pain is necessary for deconstruction,” he stated calmly.

I didn’t understand until I felt it. From the surface of the slab beneath my feet, two small, vice-like clamps materialized, pressing into the tender arches he had brutalized earlier. A low, grinding pressure began, not as intense as his hand, but relentless. It was a constant, throbbing agony, a deep, sickening ache designed to be inescapable, a foundation of misery upon which he could build. I gasped, my back arching against the restraints as the torment flared anew. My bare feet, now pinned and subjected to this automated torture, felt like they were being crushed by the weight of my own failure.

The Architect approached, his footsteps echoing in the tomb-like silence. He moved to my head, standing over me. I was forced to stare up at him, my neck held immobile by the alloy collar. His shadow fell across my face.

“The Boots, a symbol of your journey, your warrior’s path,” he lectured, his voice a soft poison. “But this…” His gloved fingers hovered near my brow, near my tiara. “This is different. This is a symbol of royalty. Of wisdom. Of a mind they say is divinely inspired. But all crowns can be removed.”

My tiara was not mere jewelry. Forged by Hephaestus, it was a badge of my station as Princess of Themyscira and an extension of my will—my star, my weapon. A hot, defiant rage, all I had left, burned in my chest. He would not take this from me.

His fingers touched the golden metal at my temples. I tried to jerk my head away, a futile gesture that only scraped my skin against the inside of my collar. His touch was firm, exploratory.

“Ah, I see,” he murmured, a hint of discovery in his voice. “It is not merely worn. It is fitted. Embedded.”

He was right. The tiara was secured by two sharp, pin-like points that pressed into my temples, a constant reminder of my duties. A proper, swift removal was painless. But he had no intention of being proper or swift.

With agonizing slowness, he began to pull it away from my forehead. Instead of lifting it cleanly, he dragged it. The sharp points dug into my skin, scraping across my temples. A searing, white-hot line of pain followed the tiara’s path. It felt like he was peeling my royalty away from my very flesh. I squeezed my eyes shut, a strangled groan escaping my lips as the metal tore at my skin. The constant, grinding pressure in my feet was a roaring bonfire of pain, but this new agony at my head was a lightning strike—sharp, focused, and utterly degrading.

He was uncrowning me. This man, with his cold hands and colder heart, was stripping me of my birthright. The humiliation was a physical force, a crushing weight on my chest that made it hard to breathe. The tear tracks on my face were cold now, but I could feel fresh tears of pain and shame welling, and I hated myself for them. I was Diana, daughter of Hippolyta, and I was being broken like a child’s toy.

With a final, sickening scrape, the tiara came free. The sudden coolness of the air on my bleeding temples was a shock. The Architect held the golden circlet in his hands, examining it as if it were a curious fossil. He turned it over, his thumb tracing the star at its center. My star. He had taken my star.

He was uncrowning me. This man, with his cold hands and colder heart, was stripping me of my birthright.

He glanced at the monitors. On the screens, the image of my face, twisted in agony, was replaced by a new, live feed. It showed my head, now bare. Two small trickles of blood, starkly red against my pale skin, ran from the scrapes on my temples down toward my jaw. I looked defeated. I looked broken.

“The crown of wisdom is removed,” the Architect declared to the empty room, holding the tiara aloft like a spoil of war. “And what is left? Not a princess. Not a strategist. Just an animal in a trap, bleeding and screaming.”

He placed my tiara on a small, sterile pedestal next to the platform, another trophy added to his collection. The constant, grinding pain in my feet continued its wretched rhythm. The sharp, stinging pain on my brow was a fresh brand of shame. And before me, the monitors displayed my own bloody, uncrowned face for me to witness. The barrage was relentless. He had taken my foundation. He had taken my crown. And I was left to wonder, with a terror that eclipsed all the pain, what piece of me he intended to carve away next.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 2

As I braced for the inevitable, a single, hot tear escaped my closed eyelid, tracing a path of shame through the grime on my temple. The Architect’s gloved fingers found the clasps on my right boot. The small click of the mechanism was as loud as a thunderclap in my defeated silence. He didn’t rush. The act was a ceremony of degradation, and he was its high priest. The whisper of leather sliding down my leg, the final pull, and then… nothing. Both boots were gone. The cold of the concrete floor seeped into the soles of my feet, a final, damning confirmation of my state. I was brought low, grounded, stripped of a symbol I had worn with honor across worlds.

The Architect let out a soft, appreciative hum. “Perfection,” he murmured. Against my will, my gaze was drawn down. I saw my feet as he must be seeing them. They were not the delicate, pampered feet of a sheltered princess. They were the feet of a warrior. High, strong arches, sculpted by a lifetime of leaping, landing, and driving forward in battle. My toes were long and straight, the muscles and tendons beneath the skin clearly defined. The skin itself was fair, but the soles were tough, lightly calloused from countless hours of barefoot training on the packed earth of Themyscira’s sparring grounds. These feet had stood on the soil of Olympus. They had braced themselves to push a planet. Now, they lay bare and useless on a dirty floor, twitching feebly in their restraints.

“The very foundation of the goddess,” the Architect said, his voice laced with a cold, academic curiosity. He reached out and, with a horrifying intimacy, wrapped his hand around my right foot. His grasp was firm, his gloved fingers pressing into my instep, his thumb settling on the sensitive arch. I recoiled instinctively, a full-body shudder, but the Hesperian Alloy held me fast.

“All that divine energy… channeled through this flesh,” he mused, his thumb stroking my arch in a slow, analytical way that made my skin crawl. “But now the conduit is closed. So what is left? Just sinew and bone?”

His grip tightened. It wasn’t a sudden crush, but a slow, grinding pressure. His thumb dug deep into the soft, vulnerable curve of my arch, pressing a nerve against the bone. A sharp, electric jolt shot up my leg. I gasped, my teeth clenched so hard my jaw ached. This wasn’t the clean pain of a sword’s edge or the concussive force of a super-powered blow. This was a debasing, invasive pain, a violation designed to produce a specific result.

He squeezed harder. The pressure became a lance of pure agony. The muscles in my arch screamed, knotted and tearing. My entire body went rigid, every weakened fiber straining against the unyielding metal. The man, this small, insignificant man, was causing me a level of torment my most powerful foes had never achieved. He was proving his thesis on my own flesh.

“There,” he whispered, a triumphant gleam in his eyes as he saw the agony contorting my face. “There is the breaking point.”

The pressure intensified to an unbearable peak. And my control shattered. A scream was torn from my throat, raw and ragged. It was not a warrior’s cry. It was the shriek of pure, helpless pain, echoing off the concrete and steel of my prison. It was the sound of my own humiliation given voice, the ultimate admission of his victory over my body.

“There,” he whispered, a triumphant gleam in his eyes as he saw the agony contorting my face. “There is the breaking point.”

As the scream died in my throat, leaving me panting and trembling, he released my foot. The sudden absence of pain was as shocking as its presence, leaving a throbbing, fiery ache in its wake. He watched me, a small, cruel smile playing on his lips. He had done it. He had dismantled the stoic Amazon, and made the goddess scream from the simple act of crushing her foot.

“The specimen is ready for transport and further study,” he said into a communicator on his wrist.

With a series of hisses, my restraints detached from the dam wall. They did not release me, however. Instead, they reconfigured, folding my limbs inward, forcing me onto my back as the entire apparatus lifted from the ground, hovering silently. I was now strapped to a floating slab of black metal, a specimen on a tray. The Architect walked calmly ahead, leading my helpless, floating form away from the site of my failure and into a dark service tunnel.

The journey was a blur of concrete walls, humming lights, and the drip of unseen water. I was cargo. Less than cargo. I was an object, a prize being taken to a more secluded location. My mind reeled, trapped in a loop of the grinding pain in my foot and the sound of my own shriek. Each throb in my arch was a reminder of his touch, of my weakness, of the man who had so thoroughly and methodically unmade me.

We emerged into a vast, sterile white chamber. It was less a lair and more a laboratory or a museum exhibit hall, silent and cold. In the center of the room was a raised platform, empty and waiting. My platform. The Architect gestured, and my hovering slab drifted toward it, preparing to dock.

“Welcome, Diana,” he said, his voice echoing in the stark emptiness. “To the theater where we will dismantle the myth, piece by piece.”

As the slab locked into place with a final, definitive clang, my eyes fell upon a set of monitors on the far wall. They flickered to life, showing close-up, high-definition images of me, captured from moments before. My face contorted in pain. My bare, vulnerable feet. My body, pinned and helpless. He wasn’t just defeating me; he was documenting it, cataloging my humiliation for his own perverse satisfaction. The dismantling had only just begun.

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Wonder Woman’s Dismantling Part 1

“I braced one crumbling buttress with my back, the pressure immense but manageable.”

The call had been a frantic one—the structural supports of the new Kord Industries hydroelectric dam were failing. A cataclysmic failure would not only plunge Metropolis into darkness but would send a wall of water into the low-lying suburbs downstream. A mission for Superman, perhaps, but he was off-world. It fell to me.

The icy spray of the churning water felt good against my skin as I descended from the sky. The groan of stressed metal was a symphony of impending disaster. My muscles, honed by millennia of Amazonian training, coiled and bunched as I landed on the cracking concrete platform. I went to work immediately, my body a seamless extension of my will. I braced one crumbling buttress with my back, the pressure immense but manageable. The familiar thrum of divine energy, a gift from the gods of Olympus, coursed through me, a warm and limitless ocean of power. I could feel every fiber of my being engaged, my shoulders and thighs straining like living marble to hold back a mountain’s worth of water and steel.

That was my first mistake. Believing the power was limitless.

As I held the failing structure, my feet planted firmly on the slick concrete, a strange sensation began to creep into the edges of my awareness. It started in my calves, a subtle coolness that had nothing to do with the river’s spray. It was a deep, internal cold, a numbness that felt profoundly wrong. The thrum of my power, usually a roaring fire within me, seemed to flicker.

I pushed harder, gritting my teeth, attributing the feeling to the sheer exertion. But the cold spread, seeping into my thighs, my core. It was a venomous lethargy, turning my powerful muscles into sluggish, heavy clay. My breath, usually steady and controlled even in the heat of battle, started to come in ragged gasps. A wave of dizziness washed over me, the roar of the water and the shriek of metal fading in and out.

What is happening to me?

My strength, my birthright, was leaving me. It wasn’t being broken; it was being siphoned away, drained like water from a broken vessel. The immense weight I was supporting suddenly became unbearable. My knees buckled. A cry of frustration and pain was torn from my throat as the buttress gave way. But instead of the catastrophic collapse I expected, there was a series of loud, pneumatic hisses.

From the walls of the dam, thick arms of a metallic alloy I didn’t recognize shot out, locking the failing structure in place. Simultaneously, restraints of the same strange, matte-black metal snapped around my wrists, my ankles, my waist, and my neck, slamming me back against the very wall I had been trying to save. The trap was sprung.

The metal was cold, impossibly so. But worse, it was inert. My remaining power, flickering and desperate, found no purchase against it. It didn’t reflect my energy; it simply absorbed it, drank it down, leaving me even emptier. Panic, an emotion I so rarely feel, began to claw at the edges of my mind. I strained, my body trembling with the effort. My muscles, which could trade blows with gods, felt like water-logged ropes. A sheen of cold sweat broke out across my brow and down my back. My heart hammered against my ribs, a frantic, trapped bird. I was weak. For the first time since I left Themyscira, I felt utterly, completely helpless.

“…restraints of the same strange, matte-black metal snapped around my wrists, my ankles, my waist, and my neck, slamming me back against the very wall I had been trying to save. The trap was sprung.”

A figure emerged from the shadows of a service entrance, his footsteps echoing with an unnerving calm in the sudden quiet. He was unassuming, a man in a tailored suit, but his eyes held the cold confidence of a master craftsman admiring his work.

“Princess Diana of Themyscira,” he said, his voice smooth and cultured. “They call me the Architect. And I have designed your end.”

He walked a slow circle around me, his gaze analytical. “The water,” he explained, gesturing to the dammed river. “Laced with custom nanites, keyed to your unique divine energy signature. They don’t attack your cells, you see. That would be too crude. They merely… decouple you from your power source. You are still an Amazon, but the god-fire that makes you a wonder is gone. You are left with only the flesh.”

My flesh felt like a prison. The restraints held my arms wide, my legs apart, a mockery of my star emblem. My head was forced back against the collar, my chin tilted up in forced submission. Every inch of me screamed with the humiliation of it. To be laid low not in glorious combat, but by a trick. A poisoned well.

The Architect stopped in front of me, his eyes drifting down. He knelt, not in reverence, but as a predator might crouch before its captured prey. My gaze was locked forward, but I could feel his attention, his focus. It landed on my feet.

On my boots.

My red and white boots. They had trod the soil of Olympus and the battlefields of Man’s World. They had kicked down the gates of Tartarus and stood firm against the tide of Parademons. They were a part of my armor, a part of my identity as a warrior.

“Such symbols you heroes rely on,” the Architect mused, his voice a low murmur. His gloved hand reached out, not with a warrior’s roughness, but with the slow, deliberate precision of a surgeon. A wave of revulsion and a deeper, sharper shame washed through me. This was a violation more profound than any blow.

His fingers traced the white stripe down the front of my left boot. I flinched, a useless twitch of a muscle. My body was a tapestry of failure, and he was examining every thread. I could feel the heat of my skin, the pounding of my pulse in my ears, the utter, sickening powerlessness.

“To defeat you is one thing,” he continued, his fingers finding the clasp near my ankle. “But to unmake you… that is artistry.”

With an audible click, he released the clasp. My breath hitched. He slowly, methodically, peeled back the leather from my calf. His touch was cold and clinical through the glove, but it felt like a brand against my skin. He wrapped his hands around the heel and the toe.

And he began to pull.

The boot slid, resisting for a moment before surrendering. The feeling was excruciatingly slow. The leather whispering against my shin, the sound of it an intimate insult. The cool air of the dam hit my bare arch, my toes, my heel. I had been barefoot on the sands of my home, in the halls of justice, but this was different. This was being stripped. My bare foot, starkly pale against the grimy floor, looked fragile, vulnerable. A symbol of my utter defeat. A hot, furious shame burned in my cheeks, a feeling so intense it almost eclipsed the physical weakness.

He set the boot down beside him with a soft thud, like a trophy. I refused to look at it. I kept my jaw clenched, my eyes fixed on the far wall, fighting the tears of pure, undiluted humiliation that threatened to fall. He had not just beaten me. He had taken a piece of me.

His gaze shifted to my right foot. My heart sank.

“And now for the other one,” the Architect said softly, his hand reaching out once more. “Let’s see what’s left of the great Wonder Woman when all the pieces are taken away.”

As his fingers closed around my other boot, I closed my eyes. The cold of the metal restraints felt like it was seeping into my very soul. The strength was gone. The hope was dwindling. All that was left was the woman, Diana, pinned and exposed, her body a testament to her failure, waiting for the final piece of her warrior’s pride to be stripped away.

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Superwoman: Ice Cold Winter Part 3

The mysterious man known as The Traveler enters Eddie’s office. He is a tall older muscular man with long white hair. He wears a tailored black suit with expensive leather shoes. Eddie could tell this man meant business and he became concerned for his own safety. Eddie stood up from his desk to greet The Traveler. “Mr. Traveler, please have a seat, make yourself comfortable.  Ya wanna drink?” Eddie said motioning to the leather chair in front of his desk. The Traveler walked past Eddie and sat in his office chair at the head of the desk. He put his feet up on the desk and leaned back in Eddie’s chair. “I’d love a drink, Carpathian Brandy, do you have it?” The Traveler asked.

Eddie looked dumbfounded as he walked over to his bar picking up a fine crystal glass. “Uh, I have cognac and carvalos.” he said. The Traveler motioned his fingers in the direction of Eddie and the glass he was holding blinked away and reappeared in front of The Traveler. Eddie watched as the glass filled up with Carpathian Brandy magically. He looked at Eddie and motioned him to sit in the guest chair in front of his desk.

Eddie felt his anger rising, but knew better than to blow up at a man who could make rare brandy appear out of thin air. Eddie poured himself a fresh drink and sat down begrudgingly. “Nice magic trick.” He said nodding towards the glass. “Magic, no trick. Magic is simply ancient technology most don’t understand.” He replied. Eddie said nothing glaring at the stranger sitting at his desk.

The Traveler sat motionless looking at Eddie. Eddie’s anger quickly subsided when he realized The Traveler was waiting for him to talk. “So, Mr. Dark sent you to kill Superwoman for me.” Eddie said.

“Incorrect, Mr. Dark paid me 50 million dollars to give you the means to kill Superwoman.” He replied. “Okay, so then how do I kill Superwoman?” Eddie asked.

The Traveler produced a small blue crystal from his pocket and tossed it on the desk. “A crystal? Are you kidding me? They don’t work no more. That Majick bitch cancelled them.” Eddie said. “This is a blue Null crystal. My own design. Majick has nothing to do with this. This one will do more than the null crystals you’ve been using. This one will not only instantly nullify her powers, it will also make her sick, dizzy and weaker than a baby.” The Traveler replies. “Yeah? and what happens if Superwoman laughs at it and kicks my ass?” Eddie asks.

“She will be helpless. You have my guarantee. In return I want her belt and choker.” The Traveler said. Eddie raised an eyebrow. “What do you want those for?” He asked. “That’s my business.” He replied.

That Night…

The blizzard had been raging for a few hours. The streets of Delta City were desolate as people stayed in the warmth of their homes. It seems even crime took a break for the winter storm.

Detective Rebecca Hunt opened the door to her apartment after a long day. She took off her coat and hung it on a chair. She put her badge and gun on a bookshelf and turned on the lights. She was surprised to see Eddie Winter sitting at her kitchen table. “Detective Hunt, shitty place you got here.” He said. Rebecca knew a distraction when she saw one. She spun around to see Big Sal ready to attack her. She quickly sent a kick into Sal’s chest sending him falling back. “Hey Sally, looks like Eddie didn’t kill you.” She moved towards the big man when suddenly a chloroform soaked rag clamped over her mouth and nose. “You’re coming with us bitch!” Eddie said into her ear. Rebecca felt herself getting dizzy and quickly elbowed Eddie to get him off her. Rebecca leaned back against the wall trying not to pass out. “Fuck!” She said to herself.

Sal and Eddie stood up and moved towards the weakened Rebecca. “She’s weak now, Sal. Work this bitch over and we’re square.” Eddie said. “You got it boss.” Sal said happily. He grabbed Rebecca by the throat with his left hand and tossed her backwards to Eddie. Eddie grabbed her arms and pulled them behind her back. Now completely defenseless and weakened from chloroform Rebecca saw Sal cocking his fat fist back. Shot after shot landing on Rebecca’s tight belly. Each shot knocking the air from her lungs. “YOU FUCKING CUNT!” Sal screamed as he started slapping Rebecca. “Look at the big bad detective now! Not so fucking mouthy when I’m not cuffed!” Sal yelled. Rebecca looked up weakly with a smirk from her bleeding mouth. “Go..fuck… yourself SALLY!” She says enraging Sal. Sal takes out his brass knuckles and cracks Rebecca across the jaw. The force of the punch ripped Rebecca out of Eddie’s grip and she crashed to the floor unconscious.

“Nice work Sal.” Eddie said reaching down and grabbing Rebecca’s hair. He pulls her head up and clamps the chloroform rag over her face. A soft moan escapes her lips through the rag as she goes completely limp. Sal handcuffs Rebecca with her own handcuffs. “Let’s get her in the car before it gets bad to drive.” Eddie says to Sal worried about the storm. Sal smiles at the unconscious Rebecca. The feeling of satisfaction seeing her defeated made him happy. He picked up the limp Rebecca and slung her limp and handcuffed body over his broad shoulder. Eddie scribbled a note and left it on Rebecca’s kitchen table. The two walked out with Rebecca into the snowy winter night to the car and drove away.

The next day there was 43 inches of snow on the ground and the storm was still raging. The city was shut down from the snow emergency. Josephine received a call at home from Captain Randolph of the Delta City Police. “Don’t suppose you and Rebecca are recovering from a hangover from last night?” He asked. “What? No? I haven’t seen Rebecca.” She replied. “Okay, sure. Well, since she doesn’t like to answer her phone tell her if she doesn’t report for duty in the next hour I’m busting her down to patrol.” He replies with a tone of light sarcasm. “Andy, I’m serious. She’s not here. Can you send a car to her apartment?” Josephine said. “I’ll try but the plows can’t keep up with the snow and my officers are stuck.” He replied. “I’ll go check on her.” She said. “Yeah? That BMW you drive has snow tracks now?” He asks. “Something like that.” She replies.

A moment later Superwoman was flying towards downtown Delta City in the heavy snowfall. Her red leotard with shimmering pantyhosed form cutting through the storm like a missile. The beautiful protector of Delta City landed at Rebecca’s apartment and walked through the front vestibule. She knew the code to enter and floated up the 3 flights of stairs to her unit. The door was partially open and she walked in. “Rebecca?” She called. She noticed her gun and badge on the bookshelf  and her jacket was hung on the chair. She noticed signs of a struggle. The kitchen chair she never sits on knocked over. Then she noticed the note on the table. She picked it up and read [Superwoman, Oh baby it’s cold outside. But Hunt’s gonna keep us warm. Nothing beats an Ice Cold Winter. Love, Eddie.]. Her blood boiled with anger at the audacity. She knew what she needed to do. She left the apartment and flew to Eddie Winter’s mansion.

At the mansion Rebecca Hunt sat tied strictly to a chair in her jeans and a t-shirt. A rag stuffed in her mouth with packing tape over her mouth. She watched as Eddie played with a small metal box. Opening it up and smiling while he looked at it. A slight blue glow on his face each time he looked at it. He noticed Rebecca watching him. “My boys watching your apartment across the street tell me Superwoman just visited your place. When she gets here she’s dead.” He said opening the box and showing Rebecca the blue glowing crystal. Rebecca started laughing behind the gag which pissed Eddie off. “You think it’s funny bitch? You won’t be laughing when I kill Superwoman!” He said scowling while reaching down and ripping the tape off her mouth. Rebecca spit the gag out.

“You fucking dip shit! The crystals don’t work. When she gets here she’s gonna rip your place apart and then I’m gonna shove my foot so far up your ass it’s gonna come out of your fucking mouth!” She screamed. Eddie backhands Rebecca across the face, the slap echoed across the large office. “You’re a fucking pussy Eddie and your stupid plan won’t work!” Rebecca screamed while looking behind her hearing the library door open. She saw a man in a high tech suit of armor. He is an older man with long white hair. “Who the fuck is this rusty old tin can?” She asked looking at The Traveler.

“Normally I would agree with you Detective Hunt, but that crystal is of my own design, not Majick’s. I assure you, Superwoman will die tonight.” He said to her. “Even if you don’t appreciate the sophistication of my armor. I am The reckoning of destiny, I am the reaper of souls. I am The Traveler.” He said sending a chill down everyone’s spine. Rebecca looked at him unfazed. “You look like a fucking idiot.” She said harshly.

“What’s with the outfit?” Eddie asked The Traveler. “This is no mere outfit. It is a tool which will power the Quantum Compass.” He replied pressing a button on his chest opening a compartment and holding up a small rune with symbols and etchings. “This is why you will give me Superwoman’s power artifacts. They will charge the Quantum Compass.” He said.

“Quantum Compass? The fuck is that?” Eddie asked. “It’s an ancient magical artifact that will allow me to travel across the Multiverse.” Traveler said.

“You are both fucking crazy. I can’t wait to see you morons in prison.” Rebecca said. Suddenly a voice over Eddie’s radio breaks through with a static voice. “Superwoman’s here. Flying from the front.” He said. Eddie picks up the radio. “Make it look good.” He says. Eddie shoves the rag back in Rebecca’s mouth and takes it shut.

Suddenly gunfire can be heard outside. The gunfire outside stops after men scream. Suddenly the loud crashing echo of a smashed heavy oak door hitting a marble floor. More gunfire, more men screaming, gunfire stops. The sound of heels hitting the mable floor then tipping and tapping on the floor with each step. The steps stop outside the door. Eddie reaches into his pocket and feels the box with the crystal in it. The double doors are ripped off their hinges revealing The red costumed Superwoman. Her red leather boots walking into the office. Her high end pantyhose shimmering in the office lights. The muscles of her legs flexing with each step she took. Her toned stomach flexes with each motion. The artifacts of power shining red and glowing as her red mask draws your attention to her perfectly shaded eyes. She is an intimidating sight to anyone with evil in their hearts. The red costume letting villains know she doesn’t care who sees her coming.

She saw Rebecca tied up and gagged on a chair and Eddie closer to the door to her left. She saw a man she didn’t know in armor. She glared at Eddie. “You made a big mistake Eddie.” She said with the confidence only a powerful Superheroine could say with conviction. She began to walk towards Eddie. Rebecca began shaking her head trying to tell Superwoman to stay back. Eddie smiled and pulled out the small metal box. Superwoman was raising her arm to grab Eddie when he opened the box and held the blue glowing crystal out in front of him.

“No bitch! You made the mistake.” He said with a sick twisted grin on his face.

Superwoman’s blood suddenly felt like it was on fire. She grabbed her chest as her confidence washed away. She fell to her knees in extreme pain. She had never felt this weak before in combination with the internal pain, even the most powerful Null Crystals never made her feel this kind of extreme pain. She looked up to see Eddie laughing at her. Eddie looked with joy as Superwoman’s face twisted in pain as she moaned and struggled to breathe.

Rebecca watched in horror as Eddie grabbed Superwoman’s hair and forced her to look at him. She looked in horror and fear as her body felt like it was burning from the inside out. “I’m gonna fucking kill you tonight Superwoman. It’s over bitch. You walked right into my trap and this time you finally lost!” He said bending down and forcing his tongue into Superwoman’s unyielding mouth and kissing her, tasting her warm mouth and exploring with his tongue. He pulled her head back and watched as she looked at him helplessly. Eddie smiled. “But first I’m gonna have fun before you die.” He put the blue glowing crystal in front of her face and watched as she looked at it twisting her face in pain. He could see the fear in her eyes behind that red mask. “N…no… please…stop.” she said weakly wheezing from her lungs.

TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 4

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