Legend of The Superwoman: Part 1

Part 1: A Pure Kindness

In the quiet dawn of the world, when humanity was but a scattered collection of nascent tribes, there existed a paradise forged by wisdom and science. On a vast, verdant continent, under the familiar light of a single, golden sun, stood the magnificent civilization of Lemuria. Their capital, Eldoria, was a city of living crystal and cultivated nature. Soaring towers, grown from immense, luminous crystals, intertwined with lush, vertical gardens, reaching for the heavens. Silent, elegant sky-gondolas navigated the air between them, their energy cores humming a soft, peaceful tune.

The Lemurian people lived in a state of prolonged harmony, guided by the Grand Council of Elders and a core philosophy of sacred isolationism. They saw themselves not as rulers of the world, but as its quiet guardians. The “younger races,” the vicious and uncivilized barbarian hordes that populated the distant lands, were viewed as humanity in its infancy—violent, unpredictable, and not yet ready for the immense power Lemurian technology could offer.

This belief, the very bedrock of their peaceful existence, was not shared by all.

Prince Xarthos, a charismatic and brilliant member of the Royal Family, stood before the Grand Council in their chamber at the heart of the Crystal Palace, his voice filled with a passionate, idealistic fire.

“For millennia, we have hidden in our perfect city while the rest of the world suffers in ignorance and brutality!” he argued. “Our technology could end their famines, cure their plagues, and silence the drums of their petty wars. To hoard this knowledge is not wisdom, Elders; it is the height of selfishness!”

Elder Theron, his ancient face a roadmap of serene wisdom, rose slowly. “Your heart is noble, Prince Xarthos,” he said, his voice calm and steady. “But your idealism blinds you. To give a child a razor is not a kindness. They would turn our gifts of healing into weapons of war. Our restraint, Prince, is the only thing that preserves the fragile balance of this world.”

“Balance?” Xarthos scoffed, his voice dripping with disillusionment. “You call this stagnation ‘balance’? I call it cowardice.”

He was overruled. That night, Prince Xarthos, the favorite son of Lemuria, secretly fled Eldoria. With him, he took data crystals containing the schematics for their fundamental technologies, heading east, to the savage, war-torn lands of The Hoard.

Far from the silent, crystalline halls of power, in a bustling market district of Eldoria, the looms of the Crimea Clan Weavers hummed with a gentle, rhythmic energy. Their shop was not large, nor were they wealthy, but their work was honest and their reputation for quality was unmatched.

Inside, a young woman of seventeen summers worked a complex pattern into a tapestry. This was Sheral Crimea. To see her was to see an effortless, almost accidental beauty. A cascade of dark brunette hair, so rich it seemed to drink the light, was tied back in a simple, practical braid to keep it from the loom. Her luminous hazel eyes were usually downcast, focused on her work, but when she looked up, they held a startling depth and a disarming kindness. Her features were perfectly sculpted, her lips full and kind, her form slender and graceful. She was, by any measure, one of the most gorgeous young women in all of Eldoria.

And she did everything she could to hide it. She dressed in simple, functional tunics, never the shimmering robes favored by others. She moved with a quiet humility, a focused posture that didn’t invite attention. But it found her anyway.

A group of popular young men, sons of wealthy engineers and councilors, sauntered past the shop. Their leader, a handsome but arrogant boy named Lyren, stopped and leaned against the doorframe.

“Sheral,” he said, his voice smooth. “The Festival of Shifting Light is tonight. They say the crystalline sculptures will be magnificent. Come with me.”

Sheral didn’t look up from her loom. “That is kind of you, Lyren, but I am needed here. My family depends on me.”

“Always the diligent little weaver,” he said with a smirk, pushing off the frame. As he walked away with his friends, his voice carried back on the market air, just loud enough for her to hear. “It’s a shame. I’d still love to be the first to nail the ‘beautiful little weirdo’ of Clan Crimea.”

Sheral’s hands paused for a barest fraction of a second, the cruel words a familiar sting. A moment later, a group of girls her own age walked by, their shimmering robes a stark contrast to her simple tunic. They shot her looks of pure, unadulterated jealousy, whispering behind their hands.

“She thinks she’s too good for anyone,” one of them hissed.

Sheral let out a quiet sigh, the casual cruelty of her peers a constant, wearying presence in her life. With few friends her own age, she often took solace elsewhere. From a small satchel by her loom, she pulled out a well-worn book, its physical pages a rarity in their world of data-slates, and lost herself in the ancient stories of a time before Lemuria’s perfection.

But the social ostracism had not hardened her heart. When a small, winged lizard darted into the shop, she still smiled and placed a small bowl of water for it in a sunbeam. When a child from a neighboring stall looked longingly at a vibrant red scarf that had a minor flaw in the weave, Sheral, with a warm smile and a nod from her mother, still gave it to her as a gift. Her kindness was not a performance; it was the very core of her being, unwavering and pure.

A neighbor stopped by the shop, his face etched with concern. “Have you heard the news?” he whispered. “Prince Xarthos has departed on an ‘extended diplomatic mission’ to the outer lands.”

Sheral’s father nodded grimly. “A strange time for diplomacy,” he said.

Sheral overheard them, a faint, unexplainable chill running down her spine. She looked out from the warmth of her family’s shop at the soaring crystal towers of her home. For the first time in her life, the shimmering paradise of Eldoria felt fragile, and a shadow, born of good intentions, was beginning to stretch across their ancient land.

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I write superheroine in peril stories. Originally intended as a place to showcase the writings of my original superheoine Superwoman, I have branched out to include popular iconic heroine stories as well. I hope you enjoy the stories as much as I enjoy creating them.
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