Ned is a skinny man in his early fortys. He lives in the basement of his mother’s house. Socially awkward and generally considered a creepy loser he lives with an impotent rage in his heart. The fact that his father is in prison for being an infamous 1980’s cult leader has made him a social outcast. He washes dishes at the diner down the street full time. 

Rachel works as a waitress at the diner. A gorgeous outgoing young woman with a bright future. Only 18 years old she is one of the very few people who acknowledges Ned. She attends DCU and has plans of becoming a lawyer. Because of her friendly banter Ned obsessively dreams of Rachel being his girlfriend. He mistakenly thinks she secretly loves him. 

“Hi Rachel.” He says to her as she clocks in. 

“Hi Ned.” she replies while putting on her waist apron. 

“How’s your college classes going? He asks awkwardly. 

“Great Ned, I think I scored an internship with Assistant DA Josephine Cirmia!” she replies excitedly. 

“How will you work here if you’re doing an internship?” he asks. 

“It’s a paid internship. I won’t have to work here anymore.” she says as she watches Ned become sad. “It’s okay Ned, I’ll still come here to eat and we’ll still be friends.” she reassures. 

“Okay.” He says awkwardly. 

Later that night at the end of their shift… 

“Hey Rachel you wanna go for a slice of pie to celebrate your internship?” Ned asks. 

“Oh… I’m sorry Ned I have plans. My boyfriend is picking me up. Rain check?” she says. 

“Boyfriend?” Ned asks. 

“Yes, AL. Oh he’s here now.” she says seeing him walk into the diner. “Bye Ned!” she says as she turns around only to have Ned grab her wrist. She turns back to him surprised. “Ned, let go!” she says forcefully. 

“NO! You love me! You’re trying to make me jealous so we just need to kiss and then you’ll be MY girlfriend.” Ned says as he pulls Rachel in and awkwardly plants his mouth on her tightly pursed lips. Rachel pulls away and slaps Ned across the face. Ned stands stunned before her. 

“ASSHOLE!” Rachel yells out. Suddenly her boyfriend Al comes running into the kitchen. He saw Ned assault Rachel. 

“What the fuck, dude? You some kind of perverted freak?” he says shoving Ned against the wall. The image of an 18 year old boy shoving a grown man against the wall was a pathetic sight. Rachel pulled AL away…. 

“Come on, he’s not worth with it. I just want to go home now.” Rachel says as her eyes tear up. AL looks at Ned who is terrified of the boy. “Fucking loser. You hear that? You’re not worth it.” he says as he walks away with Rachel. 

“I’m sorry Rachel.” Ned says meekly. 

“Just leave me alone Ned. Don’t talk to me anymore.” Rachel says to him as she leaves. 

Ned rages inside as he walks home angrily. Humiliated by Rachel and her boyfriend he walks into his house to find that his elderly mother had died in front of the TV. 

The next few days were a blur for Ned. He was fired from his job for his unwanted advance towards Rachel. He was also consumed dealing with his dead mothers affairs. Going through her personal items he finds a small wooden ornate box. It looked like an ancient artifact and when he opened it he found a gold ring with a green gem embedded in it. Attached was a note:

“Dolores, my whore slave. While I’m stuck in prison you better take care of my ring. Don’t let anyone put it on. Work with the other sluts to get me out of here. I command it, slave.” 

Ned was never allowed to meet his now elderly father. His mother always said he was a loser and she was momentarily insane for loving him. But Ned was completely alone now and he needed some semblance of family. He also wanted to know more about the ring. Ned decided to visit his dad in prison….

At the prison… 

“So, you’re my spineless son. I can smell the loser wafting off you through this prison plexiglass.” He greets his son for the first time.

Ned put his head down. “My mom died. I went through her things and found your ring with a note you wrote her.” Ned says. His dad sat back in his chair and smiled. 

“So you found the ring of dominance. I can see you haven’t tried it on because you wouldn’t be such a pussy right now if you did.” He says. Ned looks confused and listens to his dad tell him about the ring. 

“Look kid, that ring will make you invulnerable to women. They can’t hurt you, they can’t fight you. But you can completely dominate them. You can even make them your slaves by telling them they belong to you now. They will love you and obey you. No matter who the woman is…

I had Superwoman as my slave for one night. Not this new Superwoman flying around. The 80’s Superwoman before she was murdered. She was on to me and came to arrest me. She couldn’t do shit to me. I told her she belonged to me now and she became mine. I fucked her all day and night. I had a whole harem of bitches and Superwoman was gonna rob banks for me.” he explains. 

“So if the ring is so powerful how did you end up in prison?” Ned asks. 

“Look kid, once you put that on you cannot take it off. You take it off and you lose those slaves.” He says as Ned looks confused. “So you took the ring off?” Ned asks. 

“I didn’t take it off. It was taken off me by some cunt in the middle of the night!” He says showing his hand was missing a finger. “It was someone close to Superwoman. She snuck in and cut my finger off to get the ring. After that Superwoman and my harem fell out of my control. Never found out who the cunt was who snipped my finger off.” he says. 

Leaving the prison Ned knew what he was going to do. He went home and slipped the ring onto his finger. He felt a surge of energy and suddenly felt more confident. The green gem in the ring glowed as he felt the strength of this strange magic. He waited until the diner closed and walked into the kitchen from the back door. He saw Rachel taking her apron off. She didn’t see him coming. 

“Hi Rachel.” Ned said. 

Rachel was shocked and turned around to see Ned standing more confidently and speaking with more authority. 

“Ned? You shouldn’t be here! Leave or I’ll call the police!” she warned. 

Ned smirked. “You’re gonna suck my cock you fucking useless slut!”

Rachel wanted to slap him, but felt her arms unresponsive. Ned grabbed the back of her head and pulled her beautiful face into his. He looked right into her eyes. “You belong to me now!” he says as he feels her body stop resisting and her face smiling at him. 

“Yes Master!” Rachel says to Ned. He smiles “On your knees and suck my cock!” he commands. Rachel complies and sucks off Ned who cums quickly in her mouth. Rachel swallows his hot load and smiles at him. “I’m so happy I can make you cum my master.” she says happily. 

Ned notices AL is waiting for Rachel at the front door of the diner. “Take that knife and kill your boyfriend in front of everyone.” Ned orders. “Yes, Master.” Rachel replies walking out of the kitchen with the large knife. The entire restaurant witnesses Rachel stab AL in the heart murdering him. Ned calmly walks out of the kitchen laughing. “That’s what you get, bitch!” he says to himself as the screams of the customers echo through the busy street. 

Later Rebecca Hunt arrives at the gruesome murder site. Rachel is happy she killed AL and there was no motive. It was assumed Rachel just buckled under the pressure of becoming an intern to DA Josephine Cirmia. She kept saying “I serve my master, Ned.” 

Rebecca looks through the security camera footage from the kitchen. She sees Rachel give Ned a blowjob. Rebecca now needed to question Ned. She gets his address from the employee records. 

Minutes later Rebecca Hunt is walking up to Ned’s front door. She knocks and Ned slowly opens the door to a police detective badge. “Ned?” she asks even though she recognized him from the security footage. Ned invites her inside confidently.

Rebecca begins asking her questions. Ned grows bored quickly. “Yeah, bitch I fucking told her to kill him. She does what I command” he brags. Rebecca sized up Ned the second she saw him. He was confident and cocky, but his physical appearance posed no threat. Rebecca Hunt knew how to fight and Ned wouldn’t a problem. 

“I’m gonna need you to come downtown, Ned. Put your hands behind your back. You’re under arrest for accessory to murder.” Rebecca said as she pulled her handcuffs out. Ned smiled and laughed. 

“Bitch you’re not taking me anywhere.” he said as he walked over to Rebecca. Suddenly Rebecca felt unable to do anything to Ned. She saw as he wound up to back hand her face. Normally she would have dodged it easily and beat the shit out of her attacker. But she allowed the slap to connect and it sent her crashing into the coffee table. Stunned beyond belief she watched in horror as Ned approached.

“Whats wrong Detective? You’re supposed to be the best fighter around. All I see is another cocky bitch about to get dominated.” he says as he picks her up by her long blonde hair. Rebecca wanted to reach for her firearm, but couldn’t. She wanted to fight back, but couldn’t. She simply couldn’t do anything that would hurt Ned. Ned pulls Rebecca’s gun from the holster and points it at her chest. “You can’t do a fucking thing to me you cunt.” he gloats as Rebecca’s face shows panic and confusion. 

“What the fuck are you!?” Rebecca asks. 

Ned pulls her face close to his and shows her the ring glowing on his finger. “I’m MALEDOM!” he yells. “AND YOU BELONG TO ME NOW!” 

Rebecca suddenly smiles and looks at him admiringly. “Yes, Master.” she replies. Ned pulls down his pants letting his cock out. He pushes his slave onto her knees. “Suck this cock slave.” he orders. “Yes, Master.” 

The greatest detective in Delta City now sucks the cock of the criminal she was about to arrest. Maledom laughs as she works his cock with her mouth and hands. Suddenly he shoves her onto the couch and straddles her chest pinning her arms to her sides with his legs. Maledom grabs two handfuls of her blonde hair and begins to brutally fuck Rebecca’s mouth. Unable to breathe from his testicles smothering her. He quickly cums in her mouth and Rebecca swallows his “gift” smiling. Maledom climbs off. Rebecca looks at him like a God. “How can I serve you my Master?” she asks. 

“You can tell me everything you know about your friend…. SUPERWOMAN!” 

TO BE CONTINUED!